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Water

Oct 02, 2010 00:45

Title: Water
Author: Athena
Fandom: Warehouse 13
Pairing: HG Wells & Myka Bering
Rating: PG to M
Disclaimer: I don’t own these lovely ladies. Not writing for profit, just for entertainment.
Summary: Our Victorian lady learns about some new inventions from her patient, but slightly embarrassed friend.
Specail note: I couldn't come up with a good title ( Read more... )

warehouse 13, fanfiction

Comments 19

erinmar13 October 2 2010, 06:51:26 UTC

“Why don’t you look for yourself?”
this was spectacularly hot.
and you are, once again, a DEVIL WOMAN.
lovely, sexy, adorable. and it's so funny, brings out the absurdity of the things we do everyday now.
i really do love that victorian woman.

stargate_sg1sg1 October 2 2010, 06:55:54 UTC

Teehee very funny. I never considered anything like this. It makes a lot of sense though, nicely done.

HG is such a tease lol, that is just torture what she put Myka through! Very excited for the next part, I love shopping!

madfoxzz October 2 2010, 08:58:22 UTC

Ummmm Yes please! Continue! :)

alvericff October 2 2010, 09:03:37 UTC

I have to say I do like just about all your stories. Though I have to wonder if I should take each one as a separate instance of the WH13 universe or if they all occur in the same canon. Still, very good, carry on and all that.

One point though:

She was sure that HG had owned a lot of clothes way back when. She could tell by the way she carried herself, and how she always looked matriculate.

'matriculate' is to enroll at a college or uni, or to be someone in attendance at the same. You might mean 'meticulous' though in that context it would be 'and how she was always meticulous about her appearance.' For a straight one-for-one exchange you can use 'impeccable'.

Sorry if I'm coming off as a stickler.

erinmar13 October 2 2010, 19:31:31 UTC

i noticed and thought the same thing, but then i forgot cuz....um, yeah, i focused on other things.;)

athena_mou October 2 2010, 20:04:00 UTC

Why is this not a surprise to me? *EG*

erinmar13 October 2 2010, 20:06:49 UTC

it's not my fault!

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fembuck October 2 2010, 16:11:33 UTC

This was really, sweet and cute. I love Myka's nervousness and Helena's easy charm. You can totally see how its hard for Myka to deny her anything. That was an absolutely evil ending though! ;)