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Water

Oct 02, 2010 00:45

Title: Water
Author: Athena
Fandom: Warehouse 13
Pairing: HG Wells & Myka Bering
Rating: PG to M
Disclaimer: I don’t own these lovely ladies. Not writing for profit, just for entertainment.
Summary: Our Victorian lady learns about some new inventions from her patient, but slightly embarrassed friend.
Specail note: I couldn't come up with a good title ( Read more... )

warehouse 13, fanfiction

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alvericff October 2 2010, 09:03:37 UTC

I have to say I do like just about all your stories. Though I have to wonder if I should take each one as a separate instance of the WH13 universe or if they all occur in the same canon. Still, very good, carry on and all that.

One point though:

She was sure that HG had owned a lot of clothes way back when. She could tell by the way she carried herself, and how she always looked matriculate.

'matriculate' is to enroll at a college or uni, or to be someone in attendance at the same. You might mean 'meticulous' though in that context it would be 'and how she was always meticulous about her appearance.' For a straight one-for-one exchange you can use 'impeccable'.

Sorry if I'm coming off as a stickler.

erinmar13 October 2 2010, 19:31:31 UTC

i noticed and thought the same thing, but then i forgot cuz....um, yeah, i focused on other things.;)

athena_mou October 2 2010, 20:04:00 UTC

Why is this not a surprise to me? *EG*

erinmar13 October 2 2010, 20:06:49 UTC

it's not my fault!

alvericff October 2 2010, 20:24:24 UTC

Oh I completely understand. With the prospect of hot yuri in the offing the mind does tend to wander. I however, can be a pedant at the most awkward of times. A failing with which I am unfortunately burdened. =P

erinmar13 October 2 2010, 20:33:04 UTC

well, someone has to be. and it clearly won't be me XD

athena_mou October 2 2010, 20:02:44 UTC

*L* thank you for pointing it out. This is what happens when you beta your own stuff and run spell check at 1 AM after having been up since the crack of dawn :D
I try to catch everything, but it's not always easy, especially if you select the wrong thing by mistake from the spell check options. After a while you read what you want it to say. At least I do.

alvericff October 2 2010, 20:25:44 UTC

Don't get me wrong. I like the word 'matriculate'. It sounds filthy.

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