Goodness!!! Sakumoto this may not have been but seriously brain breaking (and in a fantastically good way of course!). Wonderfully done was the angst, n how I love that there were so many grey areas that they all had to work through.
Loved how Jun reminded me of Shuntaro n Shin, but yet a completely complex character that was definitely more matured than these two ever were. The sexiness just ooooooozes out of him here. Yummy is all I can say! Lol.
While it took some time before getting introduced to Sho, it was pulling on the heart strings as my impression was formed from all the ways the other characters had been viewing or interacting w him. <3 The mystery of him n how unassuming he turned out to be. Loved that it's not really developed abt how Jun n Sho came to their final consensus, n how my curiosity was just ratcheted when the three finally came together
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Hi, I'm finally taking the time to properly respond to the wonderful comments I've gotten on this story :)
This got angstier and angstier as I kept writing. This is what happens when I write for myself - I want it dark as humanly possible, I guess! I'm glad Keiko was relatable because she was still definitely doing some dishonest things. I enjoy writing people who aren't 100% perfect.
You know my feelings for this fic. So many feelings. ♥
I hope you don't mind my email vomit.
I JUST REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE THE ENDING.
But I think I would need to point out that GREAT JOB YOU DID WITH GETTING MATSUMOTO JUN LAID. Also I like how Keiko stopped when she did. Because you portrayed everyone's FEELINGS coming out. You showed their feelings. How they all were confused with what they were feeling with each other.
HOW DO YOU WRITE WITH SO MUCH FEELINGS THAT YOU MAKE YOUR READERS EMPATHIZE WITH EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER I WILL NEVER KNOW. YOU ARE JUST BRILLIANT. I HAVE ACCEPTED THIS.
Also, you know I will always be here to be your cheerleader! *hugs*
I'm really happy you kind of pushed me into making Jun more sympathetic. He definitely has positives and negatives in this story - it was fun making him flawed but still hot LMAO
I have been waiting too! I've wanted Jun/Keiko ever since seeing that Johnny's 'dating chart' that used to go around on all the memes. I didn't even care if they were true - it was enough for me really :D
So it really got to the point where if nobody was going to write this then I had to step up. I'm glad I did.
I was so worried that the whole threesome thing wasn't going to work out because I kept making things worse and worse! LOL I'm glad it still was able to happen :)
Thanks for share this story...it was fantastic to cheer my day :DD
To be honest I've just read part 1 but I found u write this story in good flow...not too hurry but not make us bore to understand the situation...now I'm gonna continue to know abt their relationship, thanks for sharing ^^
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Loved how Jun reminded me of Shuntaro n Shin, but yet a completely complex character that was definitely more matured than these two ever were. The sexiness just ooooooozes out of him here. Yummy is all I can say! Lol.
While it took some time before getting introduced to Sho, it was pulling on the heart strings as my impression was formed from all the ways the other characters had been viewing or interacting w him. <3 The mystery of him n how unassuming he turned out to be. Loved that it's not really developed abt how Jun n Sho came to their final consensus, n how my curiosity was just ratcheted when the three finally came together ( ... )
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This got angstier and angstier as I kept writing. This is what happens when I write for myself - I want it dark as humanly possible, I guess! I'm glad Keiko was relatable because she was still definitely doing some dishonest things. I enjoy writing people who aren't 100% perfect.
Thank you!
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I hope you don't mind my email vomit.
I JUST REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE THE ENDING.
But I think I would need to point out that GREAT JOB YOU DID WITH GETTING MATSUMOTO JUN LAID. Also I like how Keiko stopped when she did. Because you portrayed everyone's FEELINGS coming out. You showed their feelings. How they all were confused with what they were feeling with each other.
HOW DO YOU WRITE WITH SO MUCH FEELINGS THAT YOU MAKE YOUR READERS EMPATHIZE WITH EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER I WILL NEVER KNOW. YOU ARE JUST BRILLIANT. I HAVE ACCEPTED THIS.
Also, you know I will always be here to be your cheerleader! *hugs*
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I'm really happy you kind of pushed me into making Jun more sympathetic. He definitely has positives and negatives in this story - it was fun making him flawed but still hot LMAO
Thanks :)
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Feelings! Undercover cops! FEELINGS! I can't even articulate how perfect this is.
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So it really got to the point where if nobody was going to write this then I had to step up. I'm glad I did.
THANK YOU!!!
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<3 loved the concept of this3 way. At the very least, some sort of happy ending is here <3<3
i just.. GAAAH! *hugs author* <3 thanks for sharing
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Thank you!
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To be honest I've just read part 1 but I found u write this story in good flow...not too hurry but not make us bore to understand the situation...now I'm gonna continue to know abt their relationship, thanks for sharing ^^
Ps: I'm kinda envy of Keiko XD
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Thank you!
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