Comments | ashrayne: The Fever's Down Deep in my Bones.

ashrayne

The Fever's Down Deep in my Bones.

May 09, 2010 22:32

A first draft ( Read more... )

Comments 6

fireinmyboness May 11 2010, 18:40:03 UTC

i'm actually going to write out your poems and use them instead of wallpaper.

thats so beautiful <3

this is SO breathtaking:

Misery screeches, her voice unrefined
The venom's corroding and choking my mind
There's ice in my lungs and my breathing's confined

ashrayne May 12 2010, 23:16:59 UTC

Thank you love :)
That's one of the best compliments, ever!

fireinmyboness May 16 2010, 20:47:31 UTC

I love this ;)
would you mnd if I used two verses on a wallpaper? I'll credit you, of course!

ashrayne May 16 2010, 22:38:24 UTC

Of course you can. I'm honored :)

anonymous May 11 2010, 19:44:09 UTC

This is quite good for a first draft baby, I like it.

ashrayne May 12 2010, 23:17:12 UTC

Thanks handsome :)