I really, really loved this. Thank you so much for writing this for me! I'm not sure why, but the concept behind this has been one that I've had in my mind for a while, and I'm so glad to see it so wonderfully executed. My heart really ached for poor Claire in this. There's few things more painful that watching someone you love be in love with someone else.
I normally find voyeurism kind of creepy, but the way it was executed here, it really seemed more heartbreaking than anything else.
I loved the imagery of Claire's veins being filled up with formaldehyde. It really fits with the cold version of Claire we saw in that future.
I love alot of the little details you mixed in too. Like Claire staying with Knox. And then later moving to Japan to help Hiro out.
And that end, with Sylar finding Claire and trying to use her as a replacement for Elle, and her refusing to play the part. I loved that so much. You almost feel for him, because you can tell he's sad Elle's gone, but at the same time it's kind of a messed up thing to do, especially if he knew about Claire's feelings for Elle, and knowing Sylar, he probably did. But it's such a Sylar thing to do.
All in all, I loved this. This was everything I wanted and alot more. Thank you so much again for writing this for me!
I'm so glad to hear it. :) I actually figured this was the prompt least likely to get written (not sure why, but I did), so I was so excited to see it was the one you chose!
I normally find voyeurism kind of creepy, but the way it was executed here, it really seemed more heartbreaking than anything else.
I loved the imagery of Claire's veins being filled up with formaldehyde. It really fits with the cold version of Claire we saw in that future.
I love alot of the little details you mixed in too. Like Claire staying with Knox. And then later moving to Japan to help Hiro out.
And that end, with Sylar finding Claire and trying to use her as a replacement for Elle, and her refusing to play the part. I loved that so much. You almost feel for him, because you can tell he's sad Elle's gone, but at the same time it's kind of a messed up thing to do, especially if he knew about Claire's feelings for Elle, and knowing Sylar, he probably did. But it's such a Sylar thing to do.
All in all, I loved this. This was everything I wanted and alot more. Thank you so much again for writing this for me!
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Out of everything I've written, this is easily one of my favorite pieces, and I'm so glad you like it too!!
:) It was a sincere and total pleasure to write this for you.
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