GL FIC :: "Homecoming" [Olivia/Natalia, PG13]

[ariestess]

Title: Homecoming
Author: A. Magiluna Stormwriter
Email: stormwriter@shatterstorm.netnet
Rating: PG13
Pairings: Olivia/Natalia
Date: 24-25 July 2009
Word Count: 195
Recipiient: shaych_03Summary: Whatever Natalia had expected, the bone-crushing hug wasn't anywhere near being on her list of possibilities

Comments

[shaych_03]

brilliant :)

nits: you're missing an opening set of quote marks before "Finding my way..." and either a period or semi colon after, "I love you"

[ariestess]

Thank you for the nits... Fixing them as we speak...

[shaych_03]

heh. i knew you'd be happy to see the nits ROFL. because we're both just that way about our writing...

[ariestess]

amen to that!

[ariestess]

Thanks!