I love Jared going to John and warning him off like that. I love that you gave Chris ink. And I love that Donna finally, hopefully, got rid of Alan altogether. Just give it up, man. She's gone to the biker side.
I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter. Don't get me wrong, your writing is as good as usual, but I'm kind of annoyed by Jared's behavior.
First, with making Jensen ride his bike to the rally. I know he meant well, but I think he pushed too far. But then, I guess it's just who he his!
What made me really frown actually was that he showed his brand new tattoo to Lang. I get that he's jealous and that he wants to make sure that Lang understand where his place is but it looks like he only got the tattoo for this... I'm sure he didn't, because it's obvious he loves Jensen, but that's how I felt reading this scene.
But then, I LOVED the scene with Alan at the bike rally, and the fact that you made a lot of charcters interact with each other. And I'm really, really pleased by Phin's reaction. I hope you're not making us like him before actually make him do stupid things with Jared cause that would be cruel xD
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Well, I'm glad you liked the writing. I'm kind of sad that you didn't like it otherwise, but I guess we can't bat a thousand ALL the time, right? ;)
I think you're right -- Jared WAS jealous. But I DO have to say, I think it was pretty grown-up, how he dealt with this, considering he just used to beat people up all the time. LOL But that's my views on it! And he definitely didn't get the tattoo for that reason! He loves Jen more than he can say, I think, and does things like that to prove it. Know what I mean?
LOL I think Phin's a good guy at heart. He just takes some getting used to. ;)
I'm not offended at all, darling. I'm glad you read it!
Yeah, Jared's way of dealing with it was great and definitely grown-up, but I would have like it better if he hadn't shown his tattoo. Yeah, I know, I must be the only one getting all worked up from such tiny and insignificant details xD
I wouldn't worry about it, darling. Just 'cuz others liked it, doesn't mean you HAVE to.
I think that he flashed it, really, only to silently tell Lang who he was, rather than saying, "I'm the bf of the dude you were snogging in your office the other day!" ;) (I think that was his way of being suuuuubtle. Jared has yet to learn the FINE art of doing that!)
But yes, there's nothing saying you MUST AGREE OMG! So dooon't worry about it!
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and jared confronting john, best thing ever cause he's able to stick to just words and not go physical.
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and jared confronting john, best thing ever cause he's able to stick to just words and not go physical.
I totally agree. I'm so proud of how our boys have grown!
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That much. Times a hundred. :)
I love Jared going to John and warning him off like that. I love that you gave Chris ink. And I love that Donna finally, hopefully, got rid of Alan altogether. Just give it up, man. She's gone to the biker side.
I love this. And you. xx
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Just give it up, man. She's gone to the biker side.
HAHA, EXACTLY! *hearts you*
I love yoooou, tooooo. Times a billion and a trillion and even then some.
MWAH!
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I loved Jared's talk with Lang!
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Thanks!
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First, with making Jensen ride his bike to the rally. I know he meant well, but I think he pushed too far. But then, I guess it's just who he his!
What made me really frown actually was that he showed his brand new tattoo to Lang. I get that he's jealous and that he wants to make sure that Lang understand where his place is but it looks like he only got the tattoo for this... I'm sure he didn't, because it's obvious he loves Jensen, but that's how I felt reading this scene.
But then, I LOVED the scene with Alan at the bike rally, and the fact that you made a lot of charcters interact with each other. And I'm really, really pleased by Phin's reaction. I hope you're not making us like him before actually make him do stupid things with Jared cause that would be cruel xD ( ... )
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I think you're right -- Jared WAS jealous. But I DO have to say, I think it was pretty grown-up, how he dealt with this, considering he just used to beat people up all the time. LOL But that's my views on it! And he definitely didn't get the tattoo for that reason! He loves Jen more than he can say, I think, and does things like that to prove it. Know what I mean?
LOL I think Phin's a good guy at heart. He just takes some getting used to. ;)
I'm not offended at all, darling. I'm glad you read it!
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I think that he flashed it, really, only to silently tell Lang who he was, rather than saying, "I'm the bf of the dude you were snogging in your office the other day!" ;) (I think that was his way of being suuuuubtle. Jared has yet to learn the FINE art of doing that!)
But yes, there's nothing saying you MUST AGREE OMG! So dooon't worry about it!
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