APH: Love of a Lifetime [I]

Sep 14, 2009 10:42

Title: Love of a Lifetime [I]
Characters/Pairings: Spain, Portugal, Al-Andalus (Moorish Iberia), England, America, France, Turkey. Various pairings.
Rating: PG-13 to R
Warning: Mentions of sex in some prompts.
Summary: Five prompts from lover100.

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sakuratsukikage September 14 2009, 06:29:29 UTC
I LOVE YOU OH MY GOD.

Okay. Um. So. I just. Love. Your. Portugal. So much. ♥ ♥ ♥

This is so perfect. I just love the way . . . with the naming thing, and how Portugal wants to be different from Spain and just . . . oh, man. And his first meeting with England fkjflajflaf. And just . . . wow, Al-Andalus, badtouch much? But that . . . was really exactly how I'd imagined it.

The end bit with the meeting and Turkey was just YES. You can really see how Portugal's aged and changed and grown into himself and become a bit bitter, but still has that pride and wit and humor he was developing in the earlier pieces and just . . . .

Oh man, I love him.

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candelaria September 14 2009, 12:40:22 UTC
AAAAAH THANK YOU. I really need to stop writing new fics and finish the ones I've got but ffff its so much easier to write fic-bits than carry an entire plot. XD ( ... )

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sakuratsukikage September 14 2009, 17:36:29 UTC
OH GOD I know what you mean. And that Portugal/England is still eating my mind, but I was so lazy all weekend *sobs*.

I loved the idea of Portugal before, but I'm so in love with him now, I don't even know kfdlajf. He just keeps getting deeper and deeper and better and better. And I'm loving his sensuality. It's very . . . he approaches it in a very unique, very him sort of way, sort of proud and sort of practical but sensual all the same.

*nods* That makes a ton of sense! No wonder he wore it long and pierced his ears, ahaha. Honestly, though, his quest for individuality in these was perfect, and made me ache for him. It makes so much sense, especially with his identity as a Catholic but his fooling around with all these non-Catholics. OH MY GOD I LOVED IT. Just. Yes. I STILL KIND OF LOVED HIM THOUGH. Honestly, he was exactly how I'd imagined him, and young Portugal was just so sweet and . . . strong, and just. Guh. I definitely do! And this was exactly how I pictured it, honestly. And this:

Love did not even ( ... )

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candelaria September 14 2009, 18:06:12 UTC
I finally got to work on chapter 2 of 'Bring Me the Horizon' to start the momentum going again. Now I just have to work on that. XD ;alskdlk I still want to see it, whenever it gets written. ;D ( ... )

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karasuhimechan September 14 2009, 16:43:42 UTC
wow, this was greatXD I've read quite a few fics of your version of portugal but I've never comented on any of them, But I have to say love the guy~ <3 Love his relationship with Antonio~ such cute brothers! would like to see more of their brotherliness<3 Love this fic~

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candelaria September 14 2009, 17:11:13 UTC
hahaha thanks very much! XD I'm glad you like my Portugal, I have to admit he's growing on me quite a bit now that I just want to write everything about him~ XD And yes they are, haha. They're adorkable brothers, always bickering but they're there for each other when it counts. I'd love to write them being bros for sure. XD Thanks again!

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starshards September 14 2009, 17:14:47 UTC
I simply loved it.

Your Portugal is so wonderful, and I adore how you write his relationship with England.
<3 <3 <3

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candelaria September 14 2009, 17:17:57 UTC
Thanks so much! ♥

I've really got into the swing of writing Port now orz. I want to write fics with him everywhere and he's not even an official character. XD; But aaah I love writing him with England, they're so married. ♥ ♥ ♥

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starshards September 14 2009, 17:52:36 UTC
Welcome~

Gawd, tell me about it.
He keeps sneaking into the things that I write. I mean... he seriously ends up in everything that I write. 8|;;;;;;

That dirty sneak.
Maybe I feel like it's my husbandly duty?

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candelaria September 14 2009, 18:09:23 UTC
It's because, quite frankly, he has as much right to be there as Spain does. >8| They're a bit of a package deal in my mind, being fail!brothers and former Empires lol. XD But Portugal oh man, he's everywhere. And I want to write everything from his POV nowadays, it's crazy. :|a

He seduced me into it.
Porto-san demands all his former colonies carry on sneaking him into fics when no one is looking. It's only right.

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fallenxembers17 September 14 2009, 22:08:12 UTC
TURKEY AND PORTUGAL

OMGGGGG
FFFFFFFFFFYESSSSSSSSSS.

-cough- Anyways. On to the sane part of this comment... I. Love. Your. Portugal! He's, he's, he's fantastic. And him and England, oh my god, they're perfect. And so married. But to be perfectly honest, the Turkey/Portugal just blew my brain in the best way possible.

*continues being utterly incoherent for a while*

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candelaria September 15 2009, 03:49:05 UTC
HAHAHAHA YESSSSS.

Thank you very much, I'm really pleased with how he's developing as a character, very sensual and snarky and England is completely deredere~ over him. His waifu. But Turkey/Portugal is my seekrit guilty pleasure and there's a lot of raging flirtation between them. At least in my mind. >DDD

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. <333

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fallenxembers17 September 15 2009, 22:01:19 UTC
*snort* Why guilty? All it takes is a bit of history and a fic and I'm hooked.

Teehee, England's a waifu~

...

DOES THAT SAY 1/20?! OMG SO MUCH PORTUGAL REALLY?!
*________*

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candelaria September 16 2009, 03:21:52 UTC
Oh not guilty over making you like it, I'm very pleased about that. XD More like guilty for creating this pairing out of nowhere just based on a huge epic 16th century rivalry and then some. I ship Turkey/Greece usually but now...I want to ship this more for the lulz.

England would tell you straight up he's actually the hubby. For srs. And he sort of is. Because Port lets him. He really wears the pants in that relationship. XD

LOL IT DOES. Only because the prompts were in groups of five and it's so much easier to write them like that. |D BUT IT IS A HELL OF A LOT OF PORTUGAL. <3

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tokene September 15 2009, 05:56:15 UTC
"Fucking Europeans. Crazy, the lot of you."

Ehhh! Someone said it! They summed up Hetalia! 8DDDD
Well, the rest of the world is crazy too, but yes.

Hahaha, I loved them :D Especially the last one, and how Turkey openly announced that he'd be dragging Port home with him later.

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candelaria September 15 2009, 17:25:44 UTC
hahaha yes that's pretty much a portion of Hetalia in a nutshell. But they're all so adorably crazy you just have to love them. XDDD

Thanks very much! fff Turkey's not exactly one for subtlety. And the vague way he says things would be enough to set anyone off. Especially England haha.

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