Title: Love of a Lifetime [I]
Characters/Pairings: Spain, Portugal, Al-Andalus (Moorish Iberia), England, America, France, Turkey. Various pairings.
Rating: PG-13 to R
Warning: Mentions of sex in some prompts.
Summary: Five prompts from
lover100.
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Okay. Um. So. I just. Love. Your. Portugal. So much. ♥ ♥ ♥
This is so perfect. I just love the way . . . with the naming thing, and how Portugal wants to be different from Spain and just . . . oh, man. And his first meeting with England fkjflajflaf. And just . . . wow, Al-Andalus, badtouch much? But that . . . was really exactly how I'd imagined it.
The end bit with the meeting and Turkey was just YES. You can really see how Portugal's aged and changed and grown into himself and become a bit bitter, but still has that pride and wit and humor he was developing in the earlier pieces and just . . . .
Oh man, I love him.
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I loved the idea of Portugal before, but I'm so in love with him now, I don't even know kfdlajf. He just keeps getting deeper and deeper and better and better. And I'm loving his sensuality. It's very . . . he approaches it in a very unique, very him sort of way, sort of proud and sort of practical but sensual all the same.
*nods* That makes a ton of sense! No wonder he wore it long and pierced his ears, ahaha. Honestly, though, his quest for individuality in these was perfect, and made me ache for him. It makes so much sense, especially with his identity as a Catholic but his fooling around with all these non-Catholics. OH MY GOD I LOVED IT. Just. Yes. I STILL KIND OF LOVED HIM THOUGH. Honestly, he was exactly how I'd imagined him, and young Portugal was just so sweet and . . . strong, and just. Guh. I definitely do! And this was exactly how I pictured it, honestly. And this:
Love did not even ( ... )
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Your Portugal is so wonderful, and I adore how you write his relationship with England.
<3 <3 <3
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I've really got into the swing of writing Port now orz. I want to write fics with him everywhere and he's not even an official character. XD; But aaah I love writing him with England, they're so married. ♥ ♥ ♥
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Gawd, tell me about it.
He keeps sneaking into the things that I write. I mean... he seriously ends up in everything that I write. 8|;;;;;;
That dirty sneak.
Maybe I feel like it's my husbandly duty?
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He seduced me into it.
Porto-san demands all his former colonies carry on sneaking him into fics when no one is looking. It's only right.
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OMGGGGG
FFFFFFFFFFYESSSSSSSSSS.
-cough- Anyways. On to the sane part of this comment... I. Love. Your. Portugal! He's, he's, he's fantastic. And him and England, oh my god, they're perfect. And so married. But to be perfectly honest, the Turkey/Portugal just blew my brain in the best way possible.
*continues being utterly incoherent for a while*
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Thank you very much, I'm really pleased with how he's developing as a character, very sensual and snarky and England is completely deredere~ over him. His waifu. But Turkey/Portugal is my seekrit guilty pleasure and there's a lot of raging flirtation between them. At least in my mind. >DDD
I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. <333
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Teehee, England's a waifu~
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DOES THAT SAY 1/20?! OMG SO MUCH PORTUGAL REALLY?!
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England would tell you straight up he's actually the hubby. For srs. And he sort of is. Because Port lets him. He really wears the pants in that relationship. XD
LOL IT DOES. Only because the prompts were in groups of five and it's so much easier to write them like that. |D BUT IT IS A HELL OF A LOT OF PORTUGAL. <3
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Ehhh! Someone said it! They summed up Hetalia! 8DDDD
Well, the rest of the world is crazy too, but yes.
Hahaha, I loved them :D Especially the last one, and how Turkey openly announced that he'd be dragging Port home with him later.
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Thanks very much! fff Turkey's not exactly one for subtlety. And the vague way he says things would be enough to set anyone off. Especially England haha.
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