I hate Galadriel.
Right now, I hate everything about Galadriel but mostly I think I hate her hair. What is so frickin special about her hair anyway? I have managed to work out 99% of Fëanor’s actions; what his motives were, what was going on in that hot little head of his at the time, what events in his life caused the particular act. I understood
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Even if it was just that her hair ended up his muse for the Silmarils, I'm sure that didn't sit well with Nerdanel. I think this might be able to work... I'm going to have to do some more research into the whole thing (actually read HoME 12 instead of just getting my info second hand), but yeah, I think this might work.
Phew. At least there's a possibility he's not a pervy incestuous uncle...
I don't know where I got the idea to start with a drabble. I think I did it in the epilogue first, just because it was so short, and then liked how it worked, so continued to do it. Of course, now I have to write a drabble for each chapter... But the good thing is that since I'm in Nerdanel's POV, the drabble gives me the brief ability to jump POV and show scenes that maybe Nerdanel wasn't there for. I'm thinking that maybe near the end, when there starts to be conflict between them, it will be scenes that we see in the chapters from Nerdanel's POV, but taken from Feanor's POV. Ooooh... I like that idea...
So anyway, thank you for reading, and THANK YOU for the idea about Galadriel's hair. I was ripping my own hair out about that one.
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....And yes, I finally made up an LJ account. I felt really secretive being "Anonymous" in the few comments I've felt comfortable entering into other folks' accounts. Don't you deserve to know who exactly is daring to critique your work? Especially when you are being brave and generous enough to share it with us.
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