It's so sad, and there's such intimate description. You can see that neither of them really wants to be there, but that's it's necessary.
I kinda think this is one of the most interesting and best things you've ever written.
Thank you for making it that much deeper - not pointless sex, but a genuine and honest attempt to help Conrad. It's plausible, and painful, and totally IC.
The characters themselves dictated the mood and the mindset. I have too much respect for them both to write a pointless porno with them. Gwen plays the player but there are some things he just won't do and laying a non-platonic finger on his 'little brother' with a damn good reason is pretty close to the top of the list.
I agree with Mae: this is definately one your better works. I thought that the approach was interesting and wholly unique. Definately one of the more . . . interesting ways I've read about in regards to dealing with trauma. ^^v Nice depth, though.
The logic behind using this method (which I had meta-reasons for using) was that he's most sugguestible in a state of arousal and that was when Belal had done the most damage. He believed he deserved to be punished, so Gwen obliged while trying to insist it wasn't deserved.
*giggles* I wasn't questioning you, believe me. ^^ I understand why you did it the way you did it; I was just rolling the aftermath of it around in my head.
I gotta say, I don't particularly like the pairing, but I love your writing style. The emotions in each wording is so nicely done. And just like that, you managed to change my view of the pairing a little ^^ Cool piece.
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I kinda think this is one of the most interesting and best things you've ever written.
Thank you for making it that much deeper - not pointless sex, but a genuine and honest attempt to help Conrad. It's plausible, and painful, and totally IC.
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I'm flattered.
The characters themselves dictated the mood and the mindset. I have too much respect for them both to write a pointless porno with them. Gwen plays the player but there are some things he just won't do and laying a non-platonic finger on his 'little brother' with a damn good reason is pretty close to the top of the list.
I'm glad I captured him accurately.
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The logic behind using this method (which I had meta-reasons for using) was that he's most sugguestible in a state of arousal and that was when Belal had done the most damage. He believed he deserved to be punished, so Gwen obliged while trying to insist it wasn't deserved.
...and this made much more sense in my head.
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*snuggles* I liked~ it~!
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