Comics-I've been experimenting
The first panel
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=1272952&l=159c9&id=696838524
The second and third panels
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=1273001&l=dacba&id=696838524
I don't think the narrative is very good because it's not clear that the characters have used a transporter tech to get to the destination and it's also not clear that they can't get back before their untimely demise. But it's a little funny, so I'm going to claim success.
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=1272952&l=159c9&id=696838524
The second and third panels
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=1273001&l=dacba&id=696838524
I don't think the narrative is very good because it's not clear that the characters have used a transporter tech to get to the destination and it's also not clear that they can't get back before their untimely demise. But it's a little funny, so I'm going to claim success.