Reworked it a bit. I'm starting to overthink this into the ground.
I tried to take out or change the "I wants: and "I believes" but there are still a few in there. Please let me know if this is repetitive or unclear.
Also, if the end is weak sauce.
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In doing dramaturgical work for a production of Othello, I discovered a review of Ian McKellan's
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