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apiphile

[fic] they're gonna hang me if I stay, gonna shoot me if I run

Jan 22, 2009 06:12

Title: Modern Alchemy
Fandom: RPS - MCR/TU
Word Count: 8,800 words
Rating: ADULT. SO VERY ADULT. I mean, it's a very nuanced examination of cultural - y'know, it's not. It's pretty much just PORN. DO NOT READ IT AT WORK.
Pairing: Bob/Frank, Jepha/Frank, Jepha/Dan, Bob/Dan, just … GSF.
Warnings: Pee, GSF, D/s
Disclaimer: Obviously I don't actually ( Read more... )

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Comments 49

sinsense January 22 2009, 09:07:06 UTC

I love you and all that you stand for, the end.

One spelling error: and French the head of his did at the same time.

I only noticed on the second reading. Ayup. Filthy, dirty, ridiculous fantasticness. Again: love.

apiphile January 22 2009, 19:58:41 UTC

Whoopppppps, thank you. Fixed that. I didn't meant to turn this into a fun game of Hunt The Typo. ;)

sinsense January 22 2009, 20:32:46 UTC

I'm always a little wary of bringing up typos, because it can seem like dickheaded nitpicking. (Sorry if it did this time, btw.) I really did only notice it when I went back for a second read.

apiphile January 22 2009, 20:34:05 UTC

:P I *did* mention it in the header, so, y'know. And THANK YOU, mostly.

jaggywar January 22 2009, 10:39:31 UTC

Okay I am so glad I found your fic because holy hell this is hot.

apiphile January 22 2009, 19:58:58 UTC

Why thank you kindly!

llamapi January 22 2009, 11:03:53 UTC

I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. LIFE IS DIFFERENT NOW.

Honestly, I tend to scroll through the actual sex scenes in a lot of stories because I prefer the lead-up, and you know...plots. Also a lot of writers fall into this trap of describing action kind of mechanically, like all the personality has drained out of the characters and it's just this choreography of empty bodies I don't care about... but you kept me SO THERE with them in this. Your sex out-plots half the plots I've read. I'm bowled over.

Riveting and hot and hilarious. I AM SO CONFUSED. I DON'T LIKE PEE! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER. Basically, amazing.

apiphile January 22 2009, 20:59:07 UTC

I have the exact same problem with sex scenes vs plots and most of the time I don't write porn - I prefer humour and plot-driven stuff because writing as you said, "this choreography of empty bodies" is really hard and boring for me!

I am extremely glad you enjoyed this despite the pee and the relentless porn. :D

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apiphile January 22 2009, 20:50:20 UTC

PEE PEE PEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

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apiphile January 22 2009, 20:01:28 UTC

Ah, yes, standards. I used to have them about writing, you know. I swore blind I wouldn't write pee porn. I didn't find it remotely hot. And I certainly wasn't going to write RPS. Nuh-uh.

... OH I BARELY REMEMBER WHAT "STANDARDS" LOOK LIKE NOW.

<3 Thanks for commenting.