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[Fic]: Harry Potter and the Pet Fiancée, Part One of Three (22,200 words total)

Sep 15, 2013 02:41

Harry Potter and the Pet Fiancée
A Harry Potter fanfic
By Andrew yclept Aelfwine

Rating: PG-13. 22,200 words total. Second Year AU warning. Harry/Hermione Warning. Gentle and Consensual Male Dominant/Female Submissive Warning. Collars and Cuddling Warning. Lack of Explicit Content Warning. Luna Warning. Good!Snape Warning. Yours Truly warning ( Read more... )

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anonymous October 13 2013, 04:53:55 UTC

What's this about the Chamber of Secrets, then?

ap_aelfwine October 19 2013, 04:45:53 UTC

I'm not sure what you're trying to say, Anon ( ... )

dukebrymin October 26 2013, 04:03:56 UTC

Fabulous response. I have to admit that when I read Anon's comment the only that that popped into my mind was "Ah, they didn't catch that yes, this is Harry's Second Year." Your answer is much better than mine.

ap_aelfwine October 27 2013, 00:27:20 UTC

Thank you very much!

It occurred to me later that the anon comment may have been an innocent but clumsy attempt at asking what year the story was taking place in, but I've said "Second Year AU" at least twice, so that seems a bit much. ;-)

anonymous November 27 2013, 01:00:38 UTC

I'm not sure how the comment was meant, but my initial response to the comment was to note they had spotted the error in the chapter.

The first hugs he remembered had been from Hermione in the Chamber of Secrets,

When it should have been a reference to the chamber under the 3rd floor corridor.

Nice start to the story. I'm not completely convinced by Hermionie being willing to make that decision at the start of 2nd year, by 4th definitely but 2nd feels on the early side, though I'm willing to accept it for the story.

ap_aelfwine December 19 2013, 23:16:44 UTC

Thank you, Anon number two. I'd missed that.

So, Anon number one has a good eye, but is an idiot who doesn't understand that they need to actually quote things in order to get their point across. An idiot with a good eye is still an idiot.

Nice start to the story. I'm not completely convinced by Hermionie being willing to make that decision at the start of 2nd year, by 4th definitely but 2nd feels on the early side, though I'm willing to accept it for the story. Thank you! Have you read the rest of it ( ... )

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