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[Takagi]

Sep 20, 2009 00:21

by invitan

( The Call )

round 008, sub: invitan

Comments 5

stirring_still September 20 2009, 21:56:04 UTC

I liked the mixture of dialogue and third-person narrative style! And I'm going to go re-read it now. ^^

invitan October 4 2009, 09:02:15 UTC

Thank you <3

I actually didn't plan it to be this way initially. I've got the idea but then I just got tired of descriptive and switched to dialogue, and now I don't really know how it got to this phase =v=

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invitan October 4 2009, 09:09:14 UTC

It's hard to write as well. Especially when my native tongue is not English. I'm just afraid no one would ever try to read it. Glad it works for you <3

Poor Isumi... Basically I just want to test if Hikaru never returned to Go (and Akira), and I get him killed to achieve the purpose.

Anyway, tks for comment.

lanerose October 4 2009, 04:16:35 UTC

I thought that this was fascinating. But then, the whole idea of a slow reveal appeals to me in general. ^.^;;; It's not an AU I've ever seen addressed, and like elasticblue, I love the possibilities. I agree that it wasn't as easy to follow as some of the other stories this round. Your style in this piece is really unusual, but for me that makes it kinda shiny and bright. Anyways, nice story!! ♥

invitan October 4 2009, 09:14:48 UTC

Somehow I've got this itchiness that the difficulty in following it is due to my crappy English... I feel sorta guilty since this piece is full of grammar errors and absolutely unedited. I sent it to Blind Go just exactly 4 minute before deadline, and had no time to double-check...

Anyway, really glad you like it XD