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Song Fic: Torn

Jun 12, 2010 20:12

Title: Torn by LeToya
Length: Oneshot
Parings: Jaeho, minor HeeYun
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: NC-16+ (small sex scene)
Beta: sujudbskbb
Summary: Jaejoong are torn...
Disclaimer: Jaeho and Heechul are not mine to claimed but to themselves, songs and lyrics belonged to LaToya and record co. respectively. Story plot are owned by blurmeese, NOT MINE!!
A/N: OMG ( Read more... )

other pairing: heechul/yunho, genre: romance, length: oneshot, inspiration: song lyrics, pairing: jaejoong/yunho, genre: angst

Comments 30

anonmyous June 13 2010, 01:14:34 UTC

SPOT for blurmeese!! :D

blurmeese June 14 2010, 05:35:06 UTC

Oh woah I get my own spot? Neat ;D dies I think I've told you this before but fihskwgd thanks for thinking that my fic was worth rewriting rofl I like what you've done with the ending, ngl but I really did cop out on the end of my own ;D this gives it a more drawn out feel? Thanks for waiting for me to get back to post this ahahahaha you really didn't have to. Hope that new job of yours goes good! ♥

anonmyous June 15 2010, 00:58:34 UTC

im glad u like it!! to tell the truth, i was just plain unhappy that yunho can get away that easily. i mean the guy lied to jae and just expect for him to forget and forgive so fast was somewat...unrealistic. XXXXD but i really the plot though that's y it's upset that yun doesn't have to suffer much.

lol, i dont mind at all. ure the one that gave the permission and as the original author, i want to be able to read in time. it's only fair on my part. thank u so much about the job. i enjoyed it so far and hope to get things memorized asap.

btw,when yun was explaining himself to jae, wat was his reason to became heechul's assistant? i pretty much just take his family as a reason like by default but wat u? do tell, do tell, please, please, please. ^^

blurmeese June 15 2010, 03:14:42 UTC

I...actually didn't have any backstory planned lol it didn't seem relevant to the plot? :D

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mimz_song June 13 2010, 02:09:17 UTC

omg this was aboslutely beautiful omg i loved it :']
Tchh...*kicks heechul in the groin* Tchh u deserve so much worse bitch =_=
*sigh* Ahhh YJ are together and that's all that matters :D *downloads the song too*

anonmyous June 13 2010, 03:25:53 UTC

thank u so much!
yea kick in the story but not in real life. he doesn't deserve it. this one in the story does AHAHAHA!!
yep that's all matter hehe.
it's a good song, i really love it and hope u like it too.
:D

harajuku95 June 13 2010, 05:40:22 UTC

ohhh, I liked this story.
I remember i used to hear and listen to that song all the time.
Great story (^_^)

anonmyous June 15 2010, 01:00:14 UTC

really?!
thank u so much. i used to listen to that song a lot too back then. it was such a good song but has sad lyrics. seriously, after reading the original and listening to this song, it clicked inside my head. such an inspirational song for this fic so i couldn't let it pass. :D
glad u enjoyed it.

kana_hagino June 13 2010, 09:05:10 UTC

I'm happy you're still writing fanfics^^
Congratulations to your new jobs, hope you'll have it good there:)

Finally so much angst *-* I loved it. As far as I've seen there are some mistakes, but only minor ones.
Heechul as a villain? *lol* It was so sad imagining Yunho on the ground, crying for JJ T_T I love such fanfictions, looking forward to more FFs from you

anonmyous June 15 2010, 01:04:33 UTC

thank u so much.
lol, i wouldnt give it up that easily, though i have those moments a few times of wanting to stop but really cant ^^

hehe, im not one to write out full angst but my goal is to write tears-jerking ones that can get readers to feel my character's emotions. ull be reading that alot from my chaptered fics soon.

yea...i figured ill have mistakes. i was too tired and eager to checked for last minute grammar so i just posted it for the heck. :D lol, heechul doesn't seem to be but he does have his moments for it. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD
lol, he's is <3 by jaejae. ill keep writing more soon!!

rethzneworld June 13 2010, 18:06:07 UTC

love this :) never thought that Jae is the son of Kim co.! :D nice one Jae, oh and I like the punching scene! ahahahah poor chullie though, but he deserve it. Timid Yunnie, so cute :)

anonmyous June 15 2010, 01:07:17 UTC

AHAHAHA!!! yea i just kinda thought it would be more fun if he's from a rich family. kinda old idea but i was like 'what the heck' and just put it in. haha, glad u like it
yea...can't say much about heechul, but he'll live.
lol, i didn't realized he was so timid in the punching scene,but yea he is cute. :)