FIC - Indulgence ~Mayuri, Ishida (no pairing) ~PG13

[annieroo2]

Title: Indulgence
Pairings/Characters: Kurotsuchi Mayuri, mentions of Ishida Uryuu
Spoilers: Takes place right before manga chapter 317
Warnings: mild horror?
Rating: PG13 for language and repulsive implications
Word Count: 780
Prompt: gluttony
Written for: week #38 

Comments

[liralen]

*grins* Cool that you found someone.

A very plausible premise for Mayuri. The only line that confused me was the following: It was like a prize. Perhaps it was an over indulgence to begin testing on the shinigami now,

On the shinigami??

*hugs*

[annieroo2]

Beta all done and fixed up. Thanks for the pointer! Definitely very confusing. I just hope I did justice to the rest of the beta suggestions. :D

Thanks so much for reading this. It isn't my normal fair. I like more upbeat stuff, but sometimes my fingers seem to type a story all on their own, even when I'm freaked out about it. *laughs*

[vayshti]

just hope I did justice to the rest of the beta suggestions. :D

Most definitely! In particular, the way Mayuri moves around the lab works v. well now.

And yeah, standing back and re-reading again? Your Mayuri is cold, even when talking about hot topics like revenge, or fun. Creeeepy.

[annieroo2]

LOL! Thanks. I think XD

Cold and creepy is what I was going for. Why I was going for that I'll never understand, but I was.

And you icon... freaks me out and is completely appropriate. :D

Thanks for all the work you did and the pointers where I needed to tighten up the story. I really appreciate it. *hugs*

[vayshti]

I won't be using the icon for too long - just until I feel assured that Matsu is okay, and that I don't have to resort to black humour to cope.

Always! If you ever feel like you'd like my type of spam-edit again, feel free to ask. I enjoy doing them.

x

[annieroo2]

I'm not not completely convinced she will be okay. I wondered when Kubo would start taking a page from Kishimoto's play book and kill off beloved characters

[vayshti]

I'm wondering if he's trying to change that image in one fell swoop.

That plus the 'I can go further than Naruto!' approach he's had on occasion, makes me very, very worried. I really hope it isn't Matsu who goes, but for those reasons; too beloved, too much unresolved, nothing good will come of it for the other characters - maybe that makes her the best candidate for an untimely demise.

Hee - well, I'll be around. At this point in time I have no plans to bail anywhere else.

[annieroo2]

*Worries more* Yep the one upping Kishimoto concerns me a great deal. I really like Rangiku and I'd hate to see her die without some sort of resolution to her character. Guess I'll just have to grit my teeth and hope for the best. :D

I keep trying to blow that santa hat off Renji's lap. *laughs* Great new icon.

[vayshti]

I've heard some spoilers, and it looks like we're in limbo for another week, which I can live with - especially as some of my other wishes come true.

Bya is next ;).