Title: Indulgence
Pairings/Characters: Kurotsuchi Mayuri, mentions of Ishida Uryuu
Spoilers: Takes place right before manga chapter 317
Warnings: mild horror?
Rating: PG13 for language and repulsive implications
Word Count: 780
Prompt: gluttony
Written for: week #38
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A very plausible premise for Mayuri. The only line that confused me was the following: It was like a prize. Perhaps it was an over indulgence to begin testing on the shinigami now,
On the shinigami??
*hugs*
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Thanks so much for reading this. It isn't my normal fair. I like more upbeat stuff, but sometimes my fingers seem to type a story all on their own, even when I'm freaked out about it. *laughs*
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Most definitely! In particular, the way Mayuri moves around the lab works v. well now.
And yeah, standing back and re-reading again? Your Mayuri is cold, even when talking about hot topics like revenge, or fun. Creeeepy.
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Cold and creepy is what I was going for. Why I was going for that I'll never understand, but I was.
And you icon... freaks me out and is completely appropriate. :D
Thanks for all the work you did and the pointers where I needed to tighten up the story. I really appreciate it. *hugs*
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He was confident he’d be able to weave enough pain into his experiments to exact retribution without compromising the data.
-my fave line :D
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I REALLY appreciate you reading this. It's not like it's my normal fare.
Thank you for the lovely comments as well. :D
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I love how you have his intellectual and superiority complex in full view, as he tries to justify what he's going to undertake -- it's such classic reasoning for morally grey people, that much of the scientific community seems to comprise, and Mayuri seems to encapsulate so well. Well done.
If nothing else, it makes me feel pity for Ishida (not an easy accomplishment I tell you), because he's in for a world of pain, and you just know it's going to be inventive -- no blunt strikes, no easy 'black out' cards.
You know, for someone who doesn't like darker stuff, you do an excellent job of writing it.
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