Polyjuice sequel

[annakovsky]

Title: Harry Potter and the Ruthless Ravenclaws
Rating: PG
Pairing: Harry/Draco, sort of
AN: This a sequel to Harry Potter and the Problem with Polyjuice. And it too is for lalejandra, who "helped" me with the plot (by which I mean she came up with 80-90% of it), and who also beta'd.

Comments

[moireach]

THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL WORK OF ART WHOSE GLORY WILL SHINE FOREVER.

Allcaps Harry!! Clever Ravenclaws!! (We ROCK. ;) But heee, the ingenuity! Mirrors & books, ohmy!) Genderfuck...upedness! The first line! The last line! And maybe best of all:

Ron started to worry that polyjuice might be addictive, even going so far as to ASK HERMIONE, who got that suspicious shrewd look on her face again.

THIS IS SUCH A PHENOMENALLY STUPID MOVE THAT THE NARRATOR IS FORCED TO REVERT TO ALL-CAPS! Rock.

[moireach]

Also, Benedict Pancake??? Bwahahahaha.

[annakovsky]

HAHAHAHAHA! That is the best and funniest piece of feedback EVER. (And frankly, the narrator reverting to all caps is my favorite part, so rock!)

Also? In college I totally had a roommate named Heidi Pancake who was from Vermont and whose family made maple syrup, NO LIE.

[moireach]

Hee, YEAH BABY. Anyone can write *fic*, but awesome feedback is an *art*. ;)

Okay, I was on the phone with my mom when I read the Heidi Pancake thing and I cracked up for like five minutes. THAT CAN'T BE TRUE! Your life is so krazy, Kovsky.

[annakovsky]

Heeeee! Dude, I didn't believe it either, at first! Someone I knew was like, "You live with Heidi Pancake? Her family makes syrup, right?" And I was like, "Pfft! No. What crack are you smoking?" But then I asked her? And she was like, "Yeah, actually, we do."

You can't make this stuff up.

[lalejandra]

THIS IS SUCH A PHENOMENALLY STUPID MOVE THAT THE NARRATOR IS FORCED TO REVERT TO ALL-CAPS!

HAH. Excellent commentary. :)