Well, howdy ya'll
It's been a while, hasn't it? Well, what's better for bored vacations than to go trolling for Sues? Let's see how many I can find before my grandparents find me. Again.
Title: Betamorphs
Author: star29818 Oi, another profile full of quotes
Name: Lynessa
Species: Other Animorph
Hair: 'Long curly dark red hair'
Eyes: 'bright blue eyes'
Canon Connections: Runs across Tobias in the woods one day, will eventually be paired with him. Has her own group of morphers, each with their own brand sparkly new ships.
Special Abilities: Can morph, can raise three kids while not yet out of high school, can avoid the social security worker who is out there somewhere trying to tell her she's 16 and can't raise her three siblings, can hold awkward conversations about dead/departed parents in the first minute of meeting someone
Origin: Well, off somewhere not in ani-town this group of kids cut through a haunted field instead of an abandoned construction site...and everything else was basically the same. Right down to coming from playing video games at the mall.
Notes: I didn't get past chapter two. It was so horribly...copy cat. A shame, becuase the writing wasn't bad at all. Just...well, check out the rest of the crew:
Dakota, a native american boy I've known all my life. He's the sarcastic, smart eleck best friend. Then there's Caden, he's the stupid, reckless, crazy blonde boy that we met back when we first started highschool. Then there's Marissa, with her long black hair always in braids, and she's the calm, thoughtful one of the group. And Kylie, she's our brunette hyper girly girl.
Right down to matching the coloring. (Sarcastic guy being tan/dark, calm chick with black hair, crazy fighter being blond) About the only thing original in that is the girly girl, and speaking as a chick who has combat boots and heels side-by-side in her closet, I'd really like to see that done well. In anything, not just fanfic.
Oh, yeah, and their Ax equivolent is a female. Phail.
Excerpts:
"Nuh-uh!" Caden was saying to Dakota.
"Yeah-huh!" Dakota argued as we were walking down the street. We had spent the day at the movie/arcade place, and were walking home.
"Hey, I'm going to be grounded if I'm not home within the next five minutes." I said. "Let's cut through that field by Harper's house."
"I dunno..." Kylie murmered. "Isn't that field, like, supposed to be, I dunno, haunted or something?" She flicked a strand of brown hair over her shoulder.
"No." Marissa said as she pushed her glasses further up her nose, then flicked a black braid over her shoulder. "Theres no such things as haunted... anythings."
"You're no fun, Maria." Caden smirked. He always teases Marissa by calling her 'Maria'. and it annoys her out the yin yang. That's why he does it.
"Oh, shut up, Cadence." Marissa sneered, using his full name. Which gets on his nerves. "You're just putting stupid ideas into Kylie's head."
"You know what," Dakota said thoughtfully. "If we're going to go through Harper's field, we might want to take a left turn."
"Well, I'm cutting through it." I said. "You guys can stay on the sidewalk, but I don't want to be grounded."
"I'll go with you." Dakota said. "You need someone to protect you incase something does happen."
I gave him the fish-eye. "You think you're so big and bad? I can handle myself."
He rolled his eyes. "Yeah. This coming from the chick who won't kill spiders because they 'freak her out'."
I glared at him. "What did I say about calling me a chick?"
He grinned. "You honestly think I'm going to not call you a chick? Simply because it gets on your nerves?" He snorted and shook his head.
"I'll go too." Caden said. He smirked at Marissa. "Why don't you come, after all, it's not haunted."
She tilted her head. "Sure, I'll go."
"Well,I'm not walking home by myself." Kylie whined. "Even though this field gives me the creeps."
"I'm sure Dakota would let you ride on his back through the whole field." I smirked as we began walking through the field.
"Oh yeah, sure." Dakota rolled his eyes.
"Hey!" Marissa shrieked.
"I swear I didn't do anything!" Caden said quickly. Though he still wore his mischievous grin.
"No, what's that?" She was pointing to the sky, so we looked up. There was a bunch of red blinky lights.
"It's coming this way." Kylie whined. "I knew this field was haunted."
"It's a space ship!" Caden said excitedly. Then he did the 'live long and prosper' sign. "Dude, take me to your leader!"
"Oh shut up." Dakota told him. "But it is coming towards us."
I groaned. "I am so grounded."
"See? Told you you'd need me." Dakota smirked, but it only lasted for a minute.
"Let's go." Kylie whined. "I don't want to see what it is."
"Then go." Caden was still grinning up at the sky. "But I wanna find out what it is."
"Me too." Marissa said, staring up at the blinky lights. "It's probably a satalite or something."
Caden raised an eyebrow at her. "Oh come-"
"Can it." I interrupted him. "Look! You can see the outline."
"And it is a space ship." Caden smirked.
Dakota rolled his eyes. "You have got to chill-"
BA-BOOOOM!!!
We looked, and there was a small part of the field that was on fire. Apparently, the ship had landed.
"Let's go check it out." I said.
"Are you kidding?!" Kylie stepped back. "There is no way I'm-"
"Listen, Princess." Caden rolled his eyes. "It's either come with us, or go home by yourself."
She slumped. "Caden Smith, you are the meanest person I've ever met."
Caden grinned, but at the glare sent from the rest of us, he stayed quiet.
Title: Betamorphs
Author: star29818 Oi, another profile full of quotes
Name: Lynessa
Species: Other Animorph
Hair: 'Long curly dark red hair'
Eyes: 'bright blue eyes'
Canon Connections: Runs across Tobias in the woods one day, will eventually be paired with him. Has her own group of morphers, each with their own brand sparkly new ships.
Special Abilities: Can morph, can raise three kids while not yet out of high school, can avoid the social security worker who is out there somewhere trying to tell her she's 16 and can't raise her three siblings, can hold awkward conversations about dead/departed parents in the first minute of meeting someone
Origin: Well, off somewhere not in ani-town this group of kids cut through a haunted field instead of an abandoned construction site...and everything else was basically the same. Right down to coming from playing video games at the mall.
Notes: I didn't get past chapter two. It was so horribly...copy cat. A shame, becuase the writing wasn't bad at all. Just...well, check out the rest of the crew:
Dakota, a native american boy I've known all my life. He's the sarcastic, smart eleck best friend. Then there's Caden, he's the stupid, reckless, crazy blonde boy that we met back when we first started highschool. Then there's Marissa, with her long black hair always in braids, and she's the calm, thoughtful one of the group. And Kylie, she's our brunette hyper girly girl.
Right down to matching the coloring. (Sarcastic guy being tan/dark, calm chick with black hair, crazy fighter being blond) About the only thing original in that is the girly girl, and speaking as a chick who has combat boots and heels side-by-side in her closet, I'd really like to see that done well. In anything, not just fanfic.
Oh, yeah, and their Ax equivolent is a female. Phail.
Excerpts:
"Nuh-uh!" Caden was saying to Dakota.
"Yeah-huh!" Dakota argued as we were walking down the street. We had spent the day at the movie/arcade place, and were walking home.
"Hey, I'm going to be grounded if I'm not home within the next five minutes." I said. "Let's cut through that field by Harper's house."
"I dunno..." Kylie murmered. "Isn't that field, like, supposed to be, I dunno, haunted or something?" She flicked a strand of brown hair over her shoulder.
"No." Marissa said as she pushed her glasses further up her nose, then flicked a black braid over her shoulder. "Theres no such things as haunted... anythings."
"You're no fun, Maria." Caden smirked. He always teases Marissa by calling her 'Maria'. and it annoys her out the yin yang. That's why he does it.
"Oh, shut up, Cadence." Marissa sneered, using his full name. Which gets on his nerves. "You're just putting stupid ideas into Kylie's head."
"You know what," Dakota said thoughtfully. "If we're going to go through Harper's field, we might want to take a left turn."
"Well, I'm cutting through it." I said. "You guys can stay on the sidewalk, but I don't want to be grounded."
"I'll go with you." Dakota said. "You need someone to protect you incase something does happen."
I gave him the fish-eye. "You think you're so big and bad? I can handle myself."
He rolled his eyes. "Yeah. This coming from the chick who won't kill spiders because they 'freak her out'."
I glared at him. "What did I say about calling me a chick?"
He grinned. "You honestly think I'm going to not call you a chick? Simply because it gets on your nerves?" He snorted and shook his head.
"I'll go too." Caden said. He smirked at Marissa. "Why don't you come, after all, it's not haunted."
She tilted her head. "Sure, I'll go."
"Well,I'm not walking home by myself." Kylie whined. "Even though this field gives me the creeps."
"I'm sure Dakota would let you ride on his back through the whole field." I smirked as we began walking through the field.
"Oh yeah, sure." Dakota rolled his eyes.
"Hey!" Marissa shrieked.
"I swear I didn't do anything!" Caden said quickly. Though he still wore his mischievous grin.
"No, what's that?" She was pointing to the sky, so we looked up. There was a bunch of red blinky lights.
"It's coming this way." Kylie whined. "I knew this field was haunted."
"It's a space ship!" Caden said excitedly. Then he did the 'live long and prosper' sign. "Dude, take me to your leader!"
"Oh shut up." Dakota told him. "But it is coming towards us."
I groaned. "I am so grounded."
"See? Told you you'd need me." Dakota smirked, but it only lasted for a minute.
"Let's go." Kylie whined. "I don't want to see what it is."
"Then go." Caden was still grinning up at the sky. "But I wanna find out what it is."
"Me too." Marissa said, staring up at the blinky lights. "It's probably a satalite or something."
Caden raised an eyebrow at her. "Oh come-"
"Can it." I interrupted him. "Look! You can see the outline."
"And it is a space ship." Caden smirked.
Dakota rolled his eyes. "You have got to chill-"
BA-BOOOOM!!!
We looked, and there was a small part of the field that was on fire. Apparently, the ship had landed.
"Let's go check it out." I said.
"Are you kidding?!" Kylie stepped back. "There is no way I'm-"
"Listen, Princess." Caden rolled his eyes. "It's either come with us, or go home by yourself."
She slumped. "Caden Smith, you are the meanest person I've ever met."
Caden grinned, but at the glare sent from the rest of us, he stayed quiet.