Re: Going for brokeangelita26May 4 2014, 04:11:06 UTC
Neal lay on his back and tried to breathe through the pain that was his entire being. He had no idea where the rest of his team was. Worse yet, he didn't know where the bad guys were. There were three of them, and they'd all opened fire unexpectedly when Peter, Jones and Diana had moved into to arrest them for their embezzlement exploits.
"Ahhhh!" Neal cried out in agony when hands suddenly pressed down on the wound in his shoulder.
"Neal? Can you hear me? Neal?!"
Peter's voice. Neal struggled to open his eyes to look at his partner.
"Hey. You're going to be okay. Diana radioed for a bus. Just stay awake. Stay with me."
Neal tried to respond but coughed and cried out again as the movement jarred his shoulder.
"Shhh. Don't try to talk. Just open your eyes. Neal? Open your eyes!"
It was even harder this time, but Neal obeyed. He locked his gaze with Peter's and was startled to see how rattled Peter looked. His eyes were wide, and his face was pinched in concentration, like he could will Neal to be okay if he tried hard enough.
"You're going to be okay," Peter repeated.
Neal could do nothing but believe him. Peter was never wrong.
"Ahhhh!" Neal cried out in agony when hands suddenly pressed down on the wound in his shoulder.
"Neal? Can you hear me? Neal?!"
Peter's voice. Neal struggled to open his eyes to look at his partner.
"Hey. You're going to be okay. Diana radioed for a bus. Just stay awake. Stay with me."
Neal tried to respond but coughed and cried out again as the movement jarred his shoulder.
"Shhh. Don't try to talk. Just open your eyes. Neal? Open your eyes!"
It was even harder this time, but Neal obeyed. He locked his gaze with Peter's and was startled to see how rattled Peter looked. His eyes were wide, and his face was pinched in concentration, like he could will Neal to be okay if he tried hard enough.
"You're going to be okay," Peter repeated.
Neal could do nothing but believe him. Peter was never wrong.
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That was awesome and just what I was hoping for.
*Hides head in shame for being so damn happy about Neal in pain.*
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And yes, listen to Peter. In cases like this, he's never wrong.
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Peter's definitely not wrong - Neal will be okay... eventually ;)
Thank you!!
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I love this to bits, awww, one of my fav scenarios... and seriously, after so many GSWs, Neal should be long suffering from lead poisoning :P
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Hee! Poor Neal - we do tend to shoot him up quite a bit. *pets him gently*
Thanks!
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