Neal was unhappy. There wasn't anything in recent memory that was making him feel this way. No cases had gone south nor had he had needed to do any "outside the box" thinking that usually got him in some sort of trouble with Peter. The cases had been pretty dull, but they'd had stretches of that before during his work with the FBI
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You're most welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had no idea where it was going when I started it and then bam! Sara came to mind. I love Neal/Sara! Thanks!
Re: Going for brokeangelita26May 4 2014, 04:11:06 UTC
Neal lay on his back and tried to breathe through the pain that was his entire being. He had no idea where the rest of his team was. Worse yet, he didn't know where the bad guys were. There were three of them, and they'd all opened fire unexpectedly when Peter, Jones and Diana had moved into to arrest them for their embezzlement exploits
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Pain in his chest was his first clue that something wasn't right. The inability to take a full breath was the second. Neal tucked his left arm close to his chest and bent over to try and draw in more air
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That was awesome and just what I was hoping for.
*Hides head in shame for being so damn happy about Neal in pain.*
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How about Neal, broken? You can decide the how and/or what.
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And awww, Peter.
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So beautiful.
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Thank you
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