Drabbles with Hurts and Feels

May 03, 2014 22:27

I should be studying, but this lightning bolt of inspiration hit in chat just now, and I have to post it ( Read more... )

drabble meme, writing exercise, meme

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embroiderama May 4 2014, 02:28:05 UTC
Neal - the sads

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angelita26 May 4 2014, 03:30:23 UTC
Neal was unhappy. There wasn't anything in recent memory that was making him feel this way. No cases had gone south nor had he had needed to do any "outside the box" thinking that usually got him in some sort of trouble with Peter. The cases had been pretty dull, but they'd had stretches of that before during his work with the FBI ( ... )

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embroiderama May 4 2014, 03:31:58 UTC
Aw, Neal! Everyone off traveling when he has to stay put. I love this, thank you!

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:12:42 UTC
You're most welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had no idea where it was going when I started it and then bam! Sara came to mind. I love Neal/Sara! Thanks!

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Going for broke pooh_collector May 4 2014, 02:29:25 UTC
Neal,agony

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Re: Going for broke angelita26 May 4 2014, 04:11:06 UTC
Neal lay on his back and tried to breathe through the pain that was his entire being. He had no idea where the rest of his team was. Worse yet, he didn't know where the bad guys were. There were three of them, and they'd all opened fire unexpectedly when Peter, Jones and Diana had moved into to arrest them for their embezzlement exploits ( ... )

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Re: Going for broke pooh_collector May 4 2014, 04:15:12 UTC
AAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was awesome and just what I was hoping for.

*Hides head in shame for being so damn happy about Neal in pain.*

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Re: Going for broke angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:15:26 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write (and hey - I'm right there with you about Neal being in pain :D) Thanks!

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doctor_fangeek May 4 2014, 02:31:51 UTC
So apparently we all want Neal to have hurts and feels. Alas, me too.

How about Neal, broken? You can decide the how and/or what.

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angelita26 May 4 2014, 23:54:56 UTC
Pain in his chest was his first clue that something wasn't right. The inability to take a full breath was the second. Neal tucked his left arm close to his chest and bent over to try and draw in more air ( ... )

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embroiderama May 4 2014, 23:59:26 UTC
OUCH! I love that he wasn't powering through it but was instead like, "No, I'm going to curl up here until there are drugs." ♥

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:31:05 UTC
This felt like one of those times when he had no choice but to curl up and wait for the drugs to come to him. *hugs him gently* Thank you!!

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scarym1 May 4 2014, 02:33:43 UTC
Peter - Hope

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angelita26 May 5 2014, 01:52:16 UTC
This is a little AU at the beginning of Season 5. I couldn't help myself ( ... )

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elrhiarhodan May 5 2014, 15:41:32 UTC
Lovely - and I don't know if it's that a/u - wasn't there supposedly a scene where Mozzie did visit, as a lawyer?

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anodyneer May 5 2014, 18:47:09 UTC
Yes, according to Willie: because I'm a nerd.

And awww, Peter.

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sheenianni May 4 2014, 07:12:34 UTC
Diana, aches

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angelita26 May 5 2014, 02:21:40 UTC
This is a bit from Unbreakable - about three or four weeks after Diana and Neal were rescued ( ... )

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elrhiarhodan May 5 2014, 15:42:38 UTC
Ahhh, this 'verse always gives me a special, terrible pang.

So beautiful.

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:37:34 UTC
Me too. Their relationship really gets me every time, but I cannot stop writing it. I have such a soft spot for them.

Thank you

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