Comments | anarion: Fic: 221B

anarion

Fic: 221B - Communication

Jul 17, 2011 14:47

I really, really LOVE 221Bs! I think the format suits me best.

Title: Communication
Words: 221
Rating: R (to be safe)
Warnings: none
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Beta: me and spell check (plus a note from Verity)

Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).

Summary: John and Sherlock sometimes do ( Read more... )

fanfiction, 221b, character: sherlock holmes, sherlock_bbc, character: john watson

Comments 13

verityburns July 17 2011, 12:58:38 UTC

You do have a gift for these, my dear - you'll have to share with me the secret of brevity, I'm quite envious!

Love this one, hot and funny is a tough combo, but you pull it off effortlessly :D

anarion July 17 2011, 16:29:53 UTC

LOL, maybe we should make tutorials for each other. I teach you the art of brevity and you show me how to write thousands of words AND update once a week!

Because the conclusion of 'Blink'? Not so effortlessly...

Also: Thank you! <3

londonsabre July 17 2011, 14:46:29 UTC

Oooooh lovely!!

anarion July 18 2011, 10:03:14 UTC

Thank you for that lovely comment!

ellie_hell July 17 2011, 15:16:20 UTC

Aaaww communication problems :-)

At first, I wanted to tell Sherlock to just use his words and John would understand. But then, it all became "NO! USE YOUR NAKED AROUSED COCK INSTEAD, THAT'S BETTER!". I'm so changeable and it's your fault.

It was lovely and I'm a sucker for Sherlock who isn't a genius at verbalizing what he wants/feels when matters of the heart are concerned (yeah, no one would've guessed that). I love your 221Bs; they're fun, I'm always amazed at how much you can say with so little words and I can bump them to the top of my to-do list because seriously, how much can 221 words delay the washing up I have to do?

My favourite line is this one: You can’t just WILL me to understand. Sometimes talk is required. Because I can really imagine Sherlock doing things like that, just staring at someone with those eyes and waiting, hoping the other will catch up.

anarion July 18 2011, 10:06:30 UTC

"NO! USE YOUR NAKED AROUSED COCK INSTEAD, THAT'S BETTER!".
Hahaha!

Thank you darling for your lovely comment! <3

Yeah, it's something very Sherlocky, isn't it? :)

kironomi July 17 2011, 17:00:37 UTC

omg, that last part made me snort.

anarion July 18 2011, 10:08:25 UTC

Hehe, I hope it was a good kind of snort? :)
Not the 'OMG, what is she thinking writing such rubbish' kind.

kironomi July 18 2011, 10:16:59 UTC

It's a definitely good snort.

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anarion July 18 2011, 10:11:18 UTC

I think as long as Verity is around, who of course is NEVER showering me with B-words, there will be no stopping me. ;)

And since you jumped in now as well, there is even less chance of me not writing 221Bs. :)

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anarion July 19 2011, 13:10:45 UTC

Really? That's funny. It's the other way around for me. I start with the word, I think about it for a while (sometimes a whole night, sometimes only seconds) then a sentence comes to my mind that ends in said word. And then I come up with a scenario which could end on that sentence.

I love your prompts, especially 'bee' (there the whole process mentioned above took about two seconds, I might write it tonight) and 'bodacious'.

Yes, linking them together sounds great! :)