"ICOE" Chapter 26 Outline
Yugioh quick outline of chp. 26 (untitled)
Seto/Anzu, Seto/Anzu, and more Seto/Anzu
WARNING: CONTAINING SPOILERS MUCHLY FOR CHAPTERS THAT PROCEED
This entire chapter is basically one big fluff-fest. Seto and Anzu are happily ensconced in the bright city of (presumably) New York. Huzzah. This will be a good opportunity to explore their relationship further; Seto will be more open and Anzu will be... Anzu. Heh. They'll have dinner at some really fancy restaurant (I might just make it up, or omit a name), and maybe take a tour through a museum. (Probably MoMA, because that's the only museum in New York I've ever been to. And I did go twice.) I guess I'll give some minimal description of them doing all the normal tourist-y stuff. Ahh! They can go see a ballet. La. And THEN. Here's the fun stuff. I know this is a little corny, but I think it's also arrogant enough to be a believably Seto thing to do. Hee. Well, here's the basic (if, as I said, corny) idea. Seto grabs Anzu's hand - and she's really surprised because obviously that's not something that he'd normally do. But! He was ulterior motives. He just wanted to have an excuse to feel her fingers so he can make sure her ring size hasn't changed. Why, you ask? Well, gee, I just don't know! (Bwa ha ha.) Heh - if you haven't guessed (or read the ending scene draft I have written), the story's going to end happily, and he's going to propose. Well, sort of. (That's at the end of the story.) He might take her to a few jewelry stores pretending to look for future gift ideas - perhaps her next birthday or something, I don't think they'd celebrate any sort of anniversary. But yeah - I haven't decided if he gets the ring then (and I definitely won't describe that) or if he just picks one out. I'll just have to see once I get to writing all this. Anzu has a great time, but she doesn't suspect anything. I mean, she wouldn't, really, because that's really a small part of the whole trip. Anyway! That's basically the chapter (or at least the first scene). I still don't know how much detail I want to add to the trip, but that'll come to me later, I guess.
I want this to be written in a different style. Not so much so that it's jarring or particularly noticeable, but it's not quite as light-hearted so I want the writing to reflect it. I want it to be sort of breezy and direct, but with an ambiguous, fairly descriptive sort of undertone. I don't think that makes any sense. But anyway! Back to what actually happens. Well... Mokuba gets in a wreck. Yup. That's it.
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Yay. The first scene is AWESOME. I'm happy with what I have for this so far. Can't wait to write it!
-ILB
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Seto/Anzu, Seto/Anzu, and more Seto/Anzu
WARNING: CONTAINING SPOILERS MUCHLY FOR CHAPTERS THAT PROCEED
This entire chapter is basically one big fluff-fest. Seto and Anzu are happily ensconced in the bright city of (presumably) New York. Huzzah. This will be a good opportunity to explore their relationship further; Seto will be more open and Anzu will be... Anzu. Heh. They'll have dinner at some really fancy restaurant (I might just make it up, or omit a name), and maybe take a tour through a museum. (Probably MoMA, because that's the only museum in New York I've ever been to. And I did go twice.) I guess I'll give some minimal description of them doing all the normal tourist-y stuff. Ahh! They can go see a ballet. La. And THEN. Here's the fun stuff. I know this is a little corny, but I think it's also arrogant enough to be a believably Seto thing to do. Hee. Well, here's the basic (if, as I said, corny) idea. Seto grabs Anzu's hand - and she's really surprised because obviously that's not something that he'd normally do. But! He was ulterior motives. He just wanted to have an excuse to feel her fingers so he can make sure her ring size hasn't changed. Why, you ask? Well, gee, I just don't know! (Bwa ha ha.) Heh - if you haven't guessed (or read the ending scene draft I have written), the story's going to end happily, and he's going to propose. Well, sort of. (That's at the end of the story.) He might take her to a few jewelry stores pretending to look for future gift ideas - perhaps her next birthday or something, I don't think they'd celebrate any sort of anniversary. But yeah - I haven't decided if he gets the ring then (and I definitely won't describe that) or if he just picks one out. I'll just have to see once I get to writing all this. Anzu has a great time, but she doesn't suspect anything. I mean, she wouldn't, really, because that's really a small part of the whole trip. Anyway! That's basically the chapter (or at least the first scene). I still don't know how much detail I want to add to the trip, but that'll come to me later, I guess.
I want this to be written in a different style. Not so much so that it's jarring or particularly noticeable, but it's not quite as light-hearted so I want the writing to reflect it. I want it to be sort of breezy and direct, but with an ambiguous, fairly descriptive sort of undertone. I don't think that makes any sense. But anyway! Back to what actually happens. Well... Mokuba gets in a wreck. Yup. That's it.
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Yay. The first scene is AWESOME. I'm happy with what I have for this so far. Can't wait to write it!
-ILB
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