More Semi-Angst

Feb 06, 2009 14:43

Firefly more of this
Rayne, sort of

Aphrodite, Rising from the Sea )

incomplete, angst, firefly, one-shot, rayne, written early-09

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turtle_goose February 6 2009, 21:50:45 UTC
Wow, that is so intense! I can't wait to read more!

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an_ardent_rain February 6 2009, 23:13:33 UTC
Thanks so much! ^^ Well, I'm definitely working on it - no idea when it'll get done, though. Heh. There is a little bit here (linky in the header) that comes before this bit, but it's not very long.

Anyway, thanks again!

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willow_reece February 6 2009, 22:38:11 UTC
Not good at angst, puh. You are too, ya just prefer the happy endings. (Which this is gonna have? Yes? Hee.) Love this story so far, it's awesome. Turtle_Goose is right; very intense. Love the Aphrodite reference.

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an_ardent_rain February 6 2009, 23:06:15 UTC
*laughs* Hee - well notice where I stopped. (Right before the real angst begins!) You are right, though. I am a big fan of the happy. I'm really glad you like it so far, though! ^_^ And thanks for commenting - definitely encourages me to write.

(Like "Emperor's" 4 for example, which apparently people are waiting for... *laughs* It's in the works, too!)

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gilove2dance February 7 2009, 00:16:53 UTC
*GUH* Oh Jayne...that isn't really you...you are gentle at your heart...heehee

Yay *happy dance* More writings. I do some of my best work in class when I should be paying attention *shrugs* Much more interesting than computer programming!

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an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 00:45:48 UTC
Hee. It just takes Jayne longer to realize what we all already know. Heh.

Yup - more writings! Gettin' work done on "Emperor's", too. Hoo-ahh. ^_^ Yeah, writing's definitely more interesting sometimes - heh. I do try to pay attention, though. Sometimes.

Hee. Anyway, thanks for commenting!

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an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 01:49:57 UTC
Oh, pressure! *quails* Heh. No, I'm givin' it the old gut-wrenching try. Heh. I don't know exactly how it's going to end yet; I can't promise tears, but I can definitely promise discomfort. I'll have to write it and see what happens... Heh.

Anyway, I'm really, really glad you're enjoying this. It hasn't been as difficult to write as I was expecting! And thanks for commenting! :)

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Angst! alsunwunderland February 7 2009, 01:59:25 UTC
I'm thinking either he really is repulsed by her, or he doth protest too much...

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Re: Angst! an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 02:09:36 UTC
Not even I know yet! Heh. The only thing I'm pretty sure of is that he's furious. We shall have to see how everything else goes from there. I have two possible story endings - right now I just don't know which path I want to follow!

Anyway, thanks for commenting.

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sunshineali February 7 2009, 16:52:34 UTC
More please....this cliffhanger is getting to me. What will become of Jayne and River as they stand, conversing in the bathroom! I think he should run the hot water, dump in some bubbles and just jump in with her and have at it. But your story is much more interesting and I can't wait to see what happens. :)Ali

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an_ardent_rain February 7 2009, 17:37:12 UTC
Ooh, well don't worry! More is on its way.

Aww, your way is so cute! Hee. Unfortunately I think I gotta twist the screws into both of them just a little more. (Maybe I'll write a sequel or something that lets them be happy.)

I have three possible ending things. And I sort of know which one I'm going to choose, but I still want to write all of them just to see which is best.

Anyway, thanks for commenting! :)

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