Comments | an_ardent_rain: "Epiphany"

an_ardent_rain

"Epiphany" - River + Jayne Ficlet

Jan 25, 2009 23:10

Firefly first version of fic: Epiphany
pre-Rayne, sort of

( Epiphany )

Comments 13

willow_reece January 26 2009, 05:40:02 UTC

Oh, that's cute. (Although I'm looking forward to the sexy-sexy version too.) ♥

& I'm not in a hurry. Hee. I got the beta'd version back from gilove2dance earlier. Would have had it yesterday but there was a slight issue with me apparently not having microsoft word, only wordpad. The comments & stuff only show up if they're incorporated into the text. But I have adobe which worked just fine. Figured I should let you know this so that we don't have to go through the same run around she & I did. ♥

an_ardent_rain January 26 2009, 06:46:42 UTC

Heh - thanks! I have no idea how to make it that way, though. I thought of the title first, and the story just sort of followed... I may actually change the title, because it would work really well for an interlude in "Evolution". I sort of had an idea for him coming to realize that she's lovely or something like that, but somehow it just morphed into this. I may have to tweak it or something... Heh.

Ooh, don't have Microsoft Word? Well, I think I can just put the comments in the text in a different color. Or something! Heh.

willow_reece January 26 2009, 14:07:24 UTC

Putting them in a different color would be perfect. Hee. ♥ & I like the title, although I understand what you mean. It would be cute as a little interlude for 'Evolution'. As for the adding in the sex, sexy bits no idea. I usually add those in either by accident or I have them pre-planned before I even start writing. It's odd. =D

bdh_girl January 27 2009, 01:06:29 UTC

I have to say you are full of awesome! Cute fic and you're watching Newsies-one of the greatest movies of all time. :)

an_ardent_rain January 27 2009, 01:40:51 UTC

*laughs* Hee. Well I love being full of awesome! Hee. Ooh, yes, I love Newsies. ^^ (It's stuck in mah head even now!)

I'm glad that you thought the fic was cute! I was worried that it was just a little... flat. Heh. Anyway, thanks for the comment! :D

idyllictorture January 27 2009, 07:24:58 UTC

Oh, this was absolutely delightful. I loved the dialogue between Jayne and River. It was perfect. And yes, River is so obsessed with his balls.

an_ardent_rain January 27 2009, 15:10:23 UTC

Thanks so much! :) I'm really glad you liked it. Hee. I have so much fun writing the two of them - I think I could be happy just penning endless conversations for them. Heh.

Anyway, thanks again.

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an_ardent_rain January 28 2009, 22:24:00 UTC

Thanks for the comment! :D

Hee - yeah, that line really, really pleased me. It just seemed so terrifically River.

I'm so glad you liked it! I enjoy mishchievous!River, too. She's so very sneaky.

Anyway, thanks again! ^_^

rjsteamboat76 May 26 2009, 13:48:48 UTC

you know something, i think i'd enjoy river's little games heh. jayne seems to like them too. =)

an_ardent_rain May 26 2009, 21:59:14 UTC

Thanks for the comment! Hee. Oh yes - Jayne's a fan, he just doesn't exactly know it yet.

rjsteamboat76 May 27 2009, 02:22:37 UTC

wonder when it'll hit him? lol.

an_ardent_rain May 27 2009, 02:47:28 UTC

Heh. River just needs to knock a little sense into him.

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Okay, now you've given me another story idea. XP Heh.

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