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Jun 06, 2010 15:55

I feel like writing... its just idk what... I have that story in my mind still but its hard to finish putting all the details together... I keep finding weaknesses in the plot which stops me. I want the harvest dance/gathering to be when she realizes she loves him but can't for the lies she has told... so what does she do? leave (then is it with or without the baby?) Well as she leaves she gets in trouble... Or does she not? There needs to be a reasons she returns... Or does she leave the baby, go to city, find only trouble and return to see baby? Na... why would she?

-- u should see Nasya right now, she is all stretched out on the desk (about to knock some boxes off if she moves any more!) Relaxing in a lazy manor from watching me and watching outside! :) Love my Kitty!--

My life would have been rather different had I obeyed my mother and not been in the servants kitchen that night. I was hungry; as I cut a chunk of bread off the freshly made loaf of bread I heard a small, hesitant knock sound on the door. My first thought was to fun before I was caught but I was always too curious for my own good. So I opened the door letting just enough light escape to see the frail heavily pregnant figure of a girl no older then I hunched over in pain. The rest of the night was a blur as I tried to help the stranger deliver her baby. The clock in the hall sounded the first ring of the morning as a final push landed a small baby boy in my arms. I was amazed just looking into my arms when remembering I looked up to give the baby to his mother but she refused to take the child who began to wail. Before I could do another thing the kitchen door swung open with my stepfather's menacing red face streaming as to what was going on in his household. I looked from the baby in my arms to my others face with her wide frightened eyes with no help to be found.
I stumbled over my words trying to explain how but not really knowing myself, "She was, the baby was, I did not know,"
"That's the problem you never know anything!" He yelled then turned his attention to the girl on the floor, "How dare you come to my house and have that thing in my kitchen!"
"But, that thing is your son." She hesitantly added as he tried to catch his breath.
"How Dare You!," He yelled louder and face redder still, "That thing is not mine! Get Out! Get Out All of You!"
Then before either of us could stumble to our feet he had grabbed us and thrown us into the night. .... NOW WHAT?

ANOTHER TALE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Letter to mother to forgive/ apologize and tell that she is doing well.

Stepfather responds by going and bringing her and son home after finding out it is his son he tries to get rid of Clara.

LEtter from Clara never comes and Joseph worried when receives letter addressed to clara from her mother.

Clara begs ot be Eli's nanny= care for him for stepfather who agrees and chains her to a bed each night.

Joseph arrives in city to confront Clara abot not writing. Joseph things Clara forgot about them when he sees her, Eli and another man shopping till at the last moment he sees the man take Eli (crying) from Clara and with a grab of Clara's hair force her into a carriage they were passing.
Joseph did not know what he saw but he knew he would now have to talk with Clara to find out. He finds her crying over a wash tub.

Clara step father walk into his wife room to find Joseph talk with her. He and wife want to see Clara. As he leaves to get Clara, Joseph asks for Eli too. Step dad is Mad.

Clara overwhelmed at thought of loosing everything and going to the highest bidder. When she is suddenly called to dress. Fears the worst when walk into the room and handed Eli and sees her mother and Joseph for the first time.

Josephy made up the story fo marriage, son and told clara's mother who told husband the 'good news'. Stepdad threatens Joseph to tell the truth but Joseph turns it right back on him.

Clara mom gives her the rings she and her father had worn. Wants to pay for the baby things but not aloud.

Can't get away, must stay the first night without the baby.
Clara fears if they rant he stepfather would just follow. Joseph goes to find papers to prove they are married and Eli is Clara's.

Returns with adoption certificate from town with Clra signature; birth certificate from the town church
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