Title: Quality Time
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Jack/Ianto/Lisa, Evan, Gwen, Ravi, Claire
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 3,665
Author's Notes: So
cruentum bought my arse in the
help_haiti lightning round, and I figured why mess with a good thing? Third time's a charm. This is Gold dust fic set post series, but still before the end of the story. Crue wanted some Evan-
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I'm glad you liked because all i have to go on is my kid, and that's how we talk to each other. That's genuine Vivi art up there! well, some of it.
There was a final scene with tipsy on champagne Jack talking to Ianto while Lisa puts the kid ot bed, but I skipped out on it. It's good where it ends.
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I can see why you cut the final scene because it does work like this and actually, yeah, it feels right ending at that point rather than going on with something else.
Enjoyed it a lot because it's, yknow, it's kidfic that feel real yknow and because Ianto is awesome in his, "I'm so not comfortable with this, but dude, my coworkers are starting to LOL and/or evil-eye me, so I better, damn, here we go" and yeah, I mean, he loves his kid but it's like ... an alien, yknow. Kids are aliens, man.
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You would find that a kid cramps your jetsetting to see JB style.
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Another great, great story!
Renee
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Thanks, Renee!
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