Hmm, feel free to write extra long PWP anytime you feel like it. The original is still one of my favorite storys (It reminded me of the corbin fisher vids I like) and this kind of Dom/sub relationship is one of my most interesting places to visit.
This was great! Very hot! But also sweet sometimes too!
I'm glad Jensen retired. Jared was always going to be a little worried while Jensen was still making movies.
I did notice that their first night together Jared gives Jensen sweat pants, but in the kitchen you wrote that Jared grabs Jensen by his belt loops. Was that a mistake or are there actually sweat pants with belt loops?
It did bother me a bit that right after Jensen makes Jared pick a safe word the first planned thing they do together involves Jared not being able to talk. Jensen didn't make them come up with some type of non-verbal cue for Jared to signal to stop--which he should know about because he's been involved in the lifestyle, right? It's not a huge deal, all relationships take a little adjusting. I'm sure Jensen will figure that out they need one in the future.
I think I read "Relax, It's Just Sex" only a few months ago and I was super excited to see this sequel of sorts to see how their relationship turned out and I couldn't be more happier at the results. These two couldn't be more perfect for each other and I loved every minute of this.
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i really loved the first part 'it's just sex' and this was even better!!
really really a great story!!
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I'm glad Jensen retired. Jared was always going to be a little worried while Jensen was still making movies.
I did notice that their first night together Jared gives Jensen sweat pants, but in the kitchen you wrote that Jared grabs Jensen by his belt loops. Was that a mistake or are there actually sweat pants with belt loops?
It did bother me a bit that right after Jensen makes Jared pick a safe word the first planned thing they do together involves Jared not being able to talk. Jensen didn't make them come up with some type of non-verbal cue for Jared to signal to stop--which he should know about because he's been involved in the lifestyle, right? It's not a huge deal, all relationships take a little adjusting. I'm sure Jensen will figure that out they need one in the future.
Keep writing!
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