So right, what I was saying: Miwa Shirow is lazy. The chapter releases feature nothing but black and white and blank panels. LUCKILY, this is actually remedied in the volume releases. PANELS ARE FILLED IN WITH IMAGES. THERE ARE TONES. NAOTO DOES NOT LOOK LIKE HAINE!
So posting are some of the more obvious changes in volume 2 (Bullets and Carnage). Not all the changes were placed in (such as addition of backgrounds, some Noki and Loki stuff and one or two panels involving Giovanni and Fraulein/Freuling), because I got lazy scanning a ton of pages.
First up! The chapters now have a name. According to the table of contents:
Ch 12: Grudge & Regret
Ch 13: Silver & Steel I
Ch 14: Silver & Steel II
ch 15: Pink and Black I
Ch 16: Pink and Black II
ch 17: Pink and Black III
Ch 18: Pink and Black IV
Ch 19: Pink and Black V
Ch 20: Pink and Black VI
And the hardcore twins mini special is in volume 2.
Now come the extras!
Naoto makes a confession to Bishop, ch 12 end. Haine's broken cuffs and shoes!
Start of chapter 13, we have a nice shot of Badou walking down some street? Camo print coveralls are sexy, Badou~
Mostly background stuff! Again, mostly background stuff with Miss Liza. She has a nice place. And a boxing ring.
COMPLETE redraw. This is where Naoto introduces herself as Fuyumine Naoto.
Filled in panel with Naoto brandishing her blade. BADOU gets some action! More filled in panels, this time with badou taking a swipe at the twins.
Near the end of chapter 17 page 14, you get creepy Freuling. Also you see the train tracks and stuff filled out.
Haine's face on the right is added on, and Naoto clashes with one of the twins bottom left. SHIROW ONLY PENCILED IN the left page completely. It is finally finished. Complete redraw of chapter 20 end, when Naoto laments on who to cut. Compared to
this, much different, yes??