EXILE Samurai Story: Chapter 1 (Part 1)
Title : EXILE Samurai Story: Chapter 1 (Part 1)
Language : English
Ratings : PG-13
Disclaimer: I definitely don't own all the characters here, including the 3 girls... well, probably I just own my character...
Author's note:
This is my first EXILE Fanfic. First of all, the setting of the story is following the EXSamurai version that shown on EXILE LOVE Album and ENTERTAINMENT BEST Album. So don't expect that this story is going to be Heian time story with all those katana only weapons like the one that shown regularly on EXILE Generation. There will be some advance technologies mixed with ancient costumes and stuffs. And if there are still many tacky and non-sense scene, please forgive me. The story is still need many corrections and revise, so... feel free to comment for any suggestions... because I really need that for further development on the story. and also for misspells or any wrong grammars. And this story was un-beta-ed, so forgive me for my poor english.
And at last, I know the part 1 is kinda short. But I hope I can get responses and suggestions soon... Enjoy, girls~ ^^v
Part 1
Sounds of crackling fire seemed so close until he could smell the smoke. When he opened his eyes, he could only see fire and smoke around him. The heat of the fire touched his skin. He turned and saw his parents. He wanted to go to them, but then the roof collapsed and blocked his way. He could only see in horror when the fire danced around his parents. Then he remembered his little sister. He turned and ran to find his sister. He could hear her call on his name, but she was no where to find. Then he found a little girl who wore pink kimono with sakura motives cried on the street outside the burnt house. He went to that little girl. But just before he reached her, a big bird came and grabbed her. He extended his hand, trying to reach his little sister. But he was too late. He still can hear his sister calling his name.
“…shi… Atsushi… Atsushi!”
The call made him awaken.
Atsushi opened his eyes. He saw Sora was waking him up. Atsushi raised his body to sitting position.
“What’s the matter, Sora?” He asked.
“We’re going to arrive soon.” Sora seemed so happy. “Come out for a while.” Sora tried to make Atsushi stood up. She pulled his hand to stand up.
Atsushi stood up and followed Sora to the balcony. In the front of them laid Kyoto City.
No after a while, the boat that they used came to the port. All the members of EXSamurai came off from the boat.
The EXSamurai team arrived at Kyoto city. At the time when they wanted to enter the city gate, Atsushi stopped walking. He turned his head to the city gate. Since his other 5 friends were arrived at the outskirt of the city, Atsushi felt someone presence other than Takahiro, Usa, Matsu, Makidai and Akira, hidden. He didn’t know whether his other friends knew that they were being followed or not. But he was sure that someone was following them. But then, the presence of someone who follows them was very blurred. Atsushi never could predict whether they were really been followed or not.
“Oi, Atsushi.”
Atsushi turned to see his friends. He saw Makidai called him.
“You can be left behind.” Makidai said again.
Hiro stepped forward and came to him. “What’s wrong?” Hiro asked.
“No, nothing.” Atsushi said. “Let’s go.”
Seeing the EXsamurai members went away, a masked ninja who dressed in dark gray casual ninja uniform released a relief sigh. The ninja came out from behind the pillar on the top part of the gate, place where the ninja was hiding from the sight of the EXsamurai members.
The ninja was Lopka by the name, even though she was known for other name by everyone else except for her friends. For long, Lopka had been followed the men and watched them without doing anything to harm them or to make them know about her presence. But it seemed that Atsushi started to notice about her presence lately, so she has to be careful afterward.
Lopka looked at the higher ground afar. The tall castle stood very high and strong with an almost full moon background on the sky. It was been a while since she left to do her surveillance mission for the EXsamurai members. Now, it was almost the time for her to return to her friends. But before she returned to her friends, she must know where the EXsamurai will be stayed during their stays on the city. Lopka jumped off and went away.
To Be Continue~
Dedicated to Gail (
garnet_moon07 ) and Lopka (desshou ), thanks for being my best online friends, gals.. and Lopka, miss you so much...
Language : English
Ratings : PG-13
Disclaimer: I definitely don't own all the characters here, including the 3 girls... well, probably I just own my character...
Author's note:
This is my first EXILE Fanfic. First of all, the setting of the story is following the EXSamurai version that shown on EXILE LOVE Album and ENTERTAINMENT BEST Album. So don't expect that this story is going to be Heian time story with all those katana only weapons like the one that shown regularly on EXILE Generation. There will be some advance technologies mixed with ancient costumes and stuffs. And if there are still many tacky and non-sense scene, please forgive me. The story is still need many corrections and revise, so... feel free to comment for any suggestions... because I really need that for further development on the story. and also for misspells or any wrong grammars. And this story was un-beta-ed, so forgive me for my poor english.
And at last, I know the part 1 is kinda short. But I hope I can get responses and suggestions soon... Enjoy, girls~ ^^v
Part 1
Sounds of crackling fire seemed so close until he could smell the smoke. When he opened his eyes, he could only see fire and smoke around him. The heat of the fire touched his skin. He turned and saw his parents. He wanted to go to them, but then the roof collapsed and blocked his way. He could only see in horror when the fire danced around his parents. Then he remembered his little sister. He turned and ran to find his sister. He could hear her call on his name, but she was no where to find. Then he found a little girl who wore pink kimono with sakura motives cried on the street outside the burnt house. He went to that little girl. But just before he reached her, a big bird came and grabbed her. He extended his hand, trying to reach his little sister. But he was too late. He still can hear his sister calling his name.
“…shi… Atsushi… Atsushi!”
The call made him awaken.
Atsushi opened his eyes. He saw Sora was waking him up. Atsushi raised his body to sitting position.
“What’s the matter, Sora?” He asked.
“We’re going to arrive soon.” Sora seemed so happy. “Come out for a while.” Sora tried to make Atsushi stood up. She pulled his hand to stand up.
Atsushi stood up and followed Sora to the balcony. In the front of them laid Kyoto City.
No after a while, the boat that they used came to the port. All the members of EXSamurai came off from the boat.
The EXSamurai team arrived at Kyoto city. At the time when they wanted to enter the city gate, Atsushi stopped walking. He turned his head to the city gate. Since his other 5 friends were arrived at the outskirt of the city, Atsushi felt someone presence other than Takahiro, Usa, Matsu, Makidai and Akira, hidden. He didn’t know whether his other friends knew that they were being followed or not. But he was sure that someone was following them. But then, the presence of someone who follows them was very blurred. Atsushi never could predict whether they were really been followed or not.
“Oi, Atsushi.”
Atsushi turned to see his friends. He saw Makidai called him.
“You can be left behind.” Makidai said again.
Hiro stepped forward and came to him. “What’s wrong?” Hiro asked.
“No, nothing.” Atsushi said. “Let’s go.”
Seeing the EXsamurai members went away, a masked ninja who dressed in dark gray casual ninja uniform released a relief sigh. The ninja came out from behind the pillar on the top part of the gate, place where the ninja was hiding from the sight of the EXsamurai members.
The ninja was Lopka by the name, even though she was known for other name by everyone else except for her friends. For long, Lopka had been followed the men and watched them without doing anything to harm them or to make them know about her presence. But it seemed that Atsushi started to notice about her presence lately, so she has to be careful afterward.
Lopka looked at the higher ground afar. The tall castle stood very high and strong with an almost full moon background on the sky. It was been a while since she left to do her surveillance mission for the EXsamurai members. Now, it was almost the time for her to return to her friends. But before she returned to her friends, she must know where the EXsamurai will be stayed during their stays on the city. Lopka jumped off and went away.
To Be Continue~
Dedicated to Gail (
garnet_moon07 ) and Lopka (desshou ), thanks for being my best online friends, gals.. and Lopka, miss you so much...