The Church and Its Orbs - The Wayward God

[alien_writings]

More The Church and Its Orbs. I'm still playing around in canon, but apparently Kai *really* wants a certain flaw.

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I’ve been looking for Kai, and I found the wayward god.

Comments

[alien_writings]

I'm glad Gemma's feelings seemed real -- romantic angst type feelings aren't my strength. It seems like Gemma in these new experimental sections is more contemplative and less overtly angry, which is more difficult for me since I can write anger better than regular angst. Though there's anger there under the surface, I think. Gemma does attack a priest with a holy object, after all.

I don't know if the drinking subplot becomes a major thing in the first book or second book or what. There's possibly going to be more than one Gemma book, but who knows? (I do know YA publishers seem to like everything to be a series, and Gemma's world, I think, has potential for that.) I'm totally hopping scenes right now, heh.

If it is in the second book, I wonder how the others could go so long without realizing he had a serious problem? Maybe if they were too busy dealing with other things?

Wren honestly kind of does only start to think it's an issue when Brandon points it out for the not-so-spectacular reason that she likes Brandon. Before that, she was in some denial, I think.