Frakking in the airlock fantasy? Unbelievably awesome! Now theres a fic that needs writing like right this second.
the tilt of her chin as much of a question as the one she’s asked This just stuck out at me, I don't know if it was the phrasing or the image it put in my head but its so lovely.
Ok, I LOVED how she started packing up her stuff when she thought he wanted to call it a night.
The last glimmer of the President disappears-the responsibility, the work, all falling away (the suit, unfortunately, stays). Ded. Simple as.
“Come sit down,” he thinks he says-or at least it’s what he should have, though it sounded oddly more like c’mere: wistful, hopeful, with no pretense that getting her seated is all he’s after, just her. I could just quote the whole thing back at you really. Wonderful
Bill sits, stock-still; Laura waits behind him. I think you're trying to kill me with awesome
But he is much older, and she is- I love how you trailed off her, the power of it just knocks ya down
“Yes.”
It’s absolute, final, the answer to everything except….
“I didn’t ask-”
“You didn’t have to.”
....can't even form thoughts to that one. *happysigh*
And the last paragraph? Perfection
Ok, so this isn't exactly a critical review is it? :D I'm utterly enamoured by your writing and your take on these too.
Oh my gods! I mean, I was already on a BSG Scene of Love high from having JUST WATCHED, but you are just fabulous! I have to actually scroll up and down to respond to this, lol.
If someone wrote the airlock fantasy, I think I would die from the awesome. Ha! just had a thought---maybe she was clearing the desk because she was in tune with the desk top fantasy. Don't want any of those important papers getting lost or crumpled or.... ;)
And speaking of writing... any more of your one-shot amazingness on the horizon? *taps foot and waits*
My fabulousness is only in response to your FABULOUS AWESOMENESS. :D
LOL She's so having desk!fantasies. And couch!fantasies. And ya know its true: airlock!fantasies. Someone really needs to write and airlock sexage fic!
*looks mad innocent* hhmm? writing? me? I know not of what you speak!
Let's leave it at mutual fabulous awesomeness, shall we? It's easier than getting out the thesaurus. ;)
Heh. Airlock!fantasies. It almost begs for a Laura POV piece, doesn't it? What the hell IS she thinking all the time? What's with the airlock obsession? And why the frak hasn't she jumped him already?
*tries to look threatening* Damn. I suppose I'll have to satisfy myself by watching this week's A/R scene over and over and over....
Now for the actual FLAILING!
Frakking in the airlock fantasy? Unbelievably awesome! Now theres a fic that needs writing like right this second.
the tilt of her chin as much of a question as the one she’s asked
This just stuck out at me, I don't know if it was the phrasing or the image it put in my head but its so lovely.
Ok, I LOVED how she started packing up her stuff when she thought he wanted to call it a night.
The last glimmer of the President disappears-the responsibility, the work, all falling away (the suit, unfortunately, stays).
Ded. Simple as.
“Come sit down,” he thinks he says-or at least it’s what he should have, though it sounded oddly more like c’mere: wistful, hopeful, with no pretense that getting her seated is all he’s after, just her.
I could just quote the whole thing back at you really. Wonderful
Bill sits, stock-still; Laura waits behind him.
I think you're trying to kill me with awesome
But he is much older, and she is-
I love how you trailed off her, the power of it just knocks ya down
“Yes.”
It’s absolute, final, the answer to everything except….
“I didn’t ask-”
“You didn’t have to.”
....can't even form thoughts to that one. *happysigh*
And the last paragraph? Perfection
Ok, so this isn't exactly a critical review is it? :D I'm utterly enamoured by your writing and your take on these too.
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If someone wrote the airlock fantasy, I think I would die from the awesome. Ha! just had a thought---maybe she was clearing the desk because she was in tune with the desk top fantasy. Don't want any of those important papers getting lost or crumpled or.... ;)
And speaking of writing... any more of your one-shot amazingness on the horizon? *taps foot and waits*
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LOL She's so having desk!fantasies. And couch!fantasies. And ya know its true: airlock!fantasies. Someone really needs to write and airlock sexage fic!
*looks mad innocent* hhmm? writing? me? I know not of what you speak!
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Heh. Airlock!fantasies. It almost begs for a Laura POV piece, doesn't it? What the hell IS she thinking all the time? What's with the airlock obsession? And why the frak hasn't she jumped him already?
*tries to look threatening* Damn. I suppose I'll have to satisfy myself by watching this week's A/R scene over and over and over....
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