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Feb 23, 2007 22:26


Title: Until her heart stops. (Or ‘How to Save a Life’)
Summary: “All those dreams I had of dying - this was never one of them.”
Author’s Notes: ‘How to Save A Life’ the title is based on the song by ‘The Fray’. Alternate Endings are included - Tragic and...Less Tragic.

Cold. White. Numb.
‘Where am I? Am I dead? Am I gone?’
“Don’t worry Olivia - You ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, author: quezacolt, title: until her heart stops, length: midlength

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anonymous February 23 2007, 20:26:21 UTC
i like the happy ending better.

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half_life33 February 23 2007, 21:24:26 UTC
i love it!!
i realllly like the happy one.. but the sad one is a beautiful alternative
well written!

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gigi2690 February 24 2007, 00:01:01 UTC
I am a sucker for happy endings...but I have to admit that the sad one is tragically beautiful. I love it.
Gigi

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cate53 February 26 2007, 01:51:10 UTC
Yes, a bit of ambiguity often works well, gets people thinking.

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