Fic teaser: Tales of Knight Samuel and How He Became Minstrel Sammy

[aleash1989]

Title: Tales of Knight Samuel and How He Became Minstrel Sammy
Length: Short Story possibly (I'm not sure how long this will be.)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor, Adventure
Summary: Knight Samuel just wants to be Minstrel Sammy. Just how difficult could it be to achieve his dream? The author might say quite hard when Knight Samuel has to deal with

Comments

[aleash1989]

Do you like the title and summary? Is the language too much? Most of my readers are in the Super Kpop formed group Noonaflies United and are from Southeast Asia and I'm wondering if they'll be able to understand everything. I'd like to have an idea now, so there is less I have to change later on.

[aleash1989]

Aw, but straight English just wouldn't fit, would it? I think it might change the story too much. I'm glad you liked the summary

[aleash1989]

So you are saying the English I have is fine? I realized I need to add a translation of more words in the story. I'm debating on whether to continue to use parenthesizes or switch to dashes

[aleash1989]

I can see the shifty eye bit. TC 1 would come up to you, tilt his head to the side, and say, "Something is weird; something is not right." And then yell for Knight Samuel. lol

[aleash1989]

I had his whole idea yesterday to make one of the tales about making Knight Samuel try pizza (one of Sam's favorite food) for the first time. It would be made by some Italian immigrant or if I decide to go with what I've heard, a Chinese guy. (I've heard pizza was actually first invented by the Chinese, but I don't know if that's true.)