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Apr 23, 2008 01:37

Title: Consume

Characters: Maya/Sylar.

Rating: PG-13

Word count: 1,016

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: Missing scenes.

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razycrandomgirl April 23 2008, 03:48:11 UTC
I like the last bit with her stealing from him with her senses. I would try stuff like that if I had someone to lie comfortably with. Though if I got caught like she did I might have fained sleep. ;)

Thanks you. I don't deserve your kindness. xoxo

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albion1919 April 23 2008, 11:13:55 UTC
lol! "Were you looking at me? - "...No? *zzzzzzzzzz*" XD

Thank you! Pfft, happy to :) :)

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razycrandomgirl April 23 2008, 19:42:28 UTC
lol it'd be like hide and go seek.

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albion1919 April 23 2008, 21:18:06 UTC
Aww, that sounds cute!

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fifmeister April 23 2008, 18:39:26 UTC
Ooh, missing scenes! These were lovely!

I love how in the first one Maya's so caring and nurturing--I almost want to say "maternal," but I don't think that would be right given the context. ;)

“Does he need you to give him a sponge bath to?”

LOL! Come on now, Alejandro, you have to realize that no woman in her right mind would pass up the opportunity to give Sylar a sponge bath... XD

I loved the last one especially! You did a great job of portraying that quiet, natural intimacy. I particularly liked the description of the sound of the raindrops mixing with Sylar's breathing and heartbeat. Well done!

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albion1919 April 23 2008, 21:22:27 UTC
Thank you!

*nods* I know what you mean, she's care giving and kind so she is a bit mother henish.

LOL! omg who wouldn't! *sigh*

Thanks! I like the think they got snugly sometimes :x

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albion1919 April 23 2008, 22:53:24 UTC
Thank you!! I like doing snippets, think I'll do more :)

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