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[albion1919]

Title: Stuck. Part 2.

Characters: Maya/Gabriel.

Rating: R

Word count: 1,635

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: Gabriel and Maya get stuck in a lift. Yup.

Note: AU fic. 

Comments

[razycrandomgirl]

I’m so hot. Aren’t you?” ... “Gabriel?” ...“Take that off, you’ll burn up.”

*nasty laugh*

*sing-song voice* 'I've got a boner!' *giggles*

:X *whimper* I want him to be 28!

“You dress much older. Like Dr Suresh.” He clears his throat at her analysis but she wasn’t being mocking. Just honest. She sees he looks humiliated and slips his glasses on herself, striking a pose. “What do you think?”

I love Maya soooooo much right now! =-o

He smiles and then laughs, reaching up to push them gently up her nose and she blinks. “If you start to feel dizzy you better take them off.” He lets his hand brush a strand of her long hair for a moment, savouring it. What he really wanted to do was fist the cascade and bring her to him.

GUH! just ... GUH!

“Emergency services. How may I help you?” The woman’s voice comes shockingly loud from the speaker and both Gabriel and Maya look at it in stupefied silence before Maya jumps to her feet and presses the button frantically.

I did the same look when that happened.

... That bitch put me on hold!”lol

[albion1919]

*teeheee* ;)

He could be, you never know. I'm sure most of the characters are younger then the actors portraying them.

*pets Maya* Maybe she needs glasses! (she was squinting at the sign on the border-fence, couldn't read it)

*is evul* No sexxin for them :P

I love writing angry Maya, it's fun! :x

Yep they could have been...

[razycrandomgirl]

Oh I love the bit with the glasses!

“If you start to feel dizzy you better take them off.”

I would have burst into giggles! :X

[albion1919]

It makes me giggle to think of her in those dork glasses :P

[albion1919]

Well I think she is like that on the show, I wouldn‘t be writing her like that otherwise. Anytime she's been angry she's been not only seriously enraged but violent. She’s nice and all but don’t get on her bad side ;)

[albion1919]

Ohhh ok. Well I see her like that, whatever her accent :)

[fifmeister]

Poor Gabriel, all tongue-twisted! I know how he feels. *hugs him*

The UST in this chapter was HOT! *fans self* I loved the way you described it, with the heat from being trapped in a tiny elevator and the body heat and the UST-related heat all combining. ;)

He lets his hand brush a strand of her long hair for a moment, savouring it. What he really wanted to do was fist the cascade and bring her to him.

I'm with Cana--GUH is right! XD

The ending was particularly great! *giggles*

[albion1919]

Gabriel is probably not comfortable in many social situations and that one least of all! :P

Ohhh thank you! I hoped that there was enough UST in there.

His love of her hair, I will use it whenever possible lol ;)

Thank you!

[bellonablack]

...

I have uh, been stuck in an elevator, and you got it perfectly. Well, not the flirtatious part for me. I was stuck in with another girl, and when the guy came on the phone in there, she cursed him out and asked him if he was an idiot since he mentioned it would be some time...scared the hell out of me, and I thought I wasn't getting out after that.

Maya and Gabriel seem to have a better time than I did. >.> (is envious)

Very well-written, and awesome.

[albion1919]

I'd hate that to happen, I take the stairs whenever possible! But I think I'd loose my temper in that situation to and I'm pretty easy going.

Hee, they sure did... ;)

Thank you!!! :D

Nice Morgan Le Fay icon btw :)