Transference

Jul 16, 2011 21:09

Title: Transference
Characters/Pairing: Bonnie/Tyler
Fandom: Vampire Diaries
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,271
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Bonnie tries to ease Tyler's transformation
Note: Happy birthday razycrandomgirl! Hope you like ;)
Unbet'd, all mistakes mine.

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razycrandomgirl July 17 2011, 04:33:43 UTC
I love this bit:

That gave him pause. He stood still, staring down at her with eyes that suddenly shone gold. She knew at that moment he was thinking of his dead uncle and the vampire that killed him.

But not the one that helped make it happen. Bonnie clapped down on that stray dark thought hard, pushing it down. She wanted him to say Damon just as much as she dreaded it. He deserved to die but did he deserved to be tortured?

I'm sure this is something Bonnie tells herself to make herself feel less badly.

athame Good word! \o/

He was begging for it to end, calling out for his mother, his father. That was the worst and no matter what she did she couldn’t make the torment go away.

this is tearing me into bits. D=

I LOVE THIS! I love the spell I love the descriptions!

The moon was fat and bright and his tail wagged, thumping the earth. Then he cocked his head, curious ( ... )

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albion1919 July 17 2011, 10:39:36 UTC
YAY :D

This could have been quite dark. Bonnie played a part in the death of his uncle and dad but he doesn't know that. I like to think, in this fic at least, that it weighs a lot on her mind.

Can you see that the story about transferring bad/good luck helped shape this?

lol I've been reading A Song of Ice and Fire and I love the descriptions of the direwolves. So I thought it would be fun to write Tyler the wolf! :P

You're welcome! Felt good to write :)

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razycrandomgirl July 17 2011, 16:02:41 UTC
I forgot that Bonnie was sorta kinda involved in the death of Richard Lockwood. I think it's more John's fault and the fact that the towns deputies put their Mayor in a basement with a bunch of vampires ... which she helped release ... O_O oh shit.

I saw it! I asked myself if it was Pumpkin Child, but then I got sucked into how good this story is! :D And it was even a little sexy, which I was not expecting. :D

I thought you would have got it from Cujo. I know King does the thing where he goes inside the mind of the animal sometimes. I loved it! At first I thought Bonnie turned into a wolf and I was freaking out! But then I laughed when I saw that it was Tyler's reflection. :D

You banged it out quick! I was impressed.
are you going to cross post? Would you mind if I pimped it?

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albion1919 July 17 2011, 16:11:11 UTC
She's not directly responsible but I can see her feeling bad about it anyway.

Yup that's where I got the idea from. Magic in both stories is all to do with balance so it was as good fit.

lol I don't ship them but I don't have a problem putting on the goggles for a bit ;)

I haven't read that! In ASOAF some of the characters are "wargs" who can slip into the minds of animals.

I thought about posting it to the Bonnie comm. I'm not sure if there's one for Tyler/Bonnie. Aww really? Thank you, go ahead :D

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flwrpwr_vampyre July 18 2011, 20:28:28 UTC
Welp, this is amazing. I love this ship and wish there were more fics, especially fics that are this quality.

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albion1919 July 18 2011, 20:35:15 UTC
Aww thank you so much! :D

I'm mainly a Bonnie/Stefan shipper but I can see the appeal of these two and I enjoyed writing them! Now if they would just give them scene on the show...

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razycrandomgirl July 21 2011, 00:43:15 UTC
I know right!

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angryzen July 26 2011, 08:21:43 UTC
Great story! I love how you wrote Tyler, the wolf. And I love the ending, her waking up with his face in her hand.

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albion1919 July 29 2011, 14:11:01 UTC
Thank you! lol I didn't plan on doing the wolf POV but I'm glad it turhned out that way because it was fun to write.

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albion1919 January 2 2012, 14:23:45 UTC
Aww I just saw this! Thank you :) :)

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