Comments | albion1919: Under a Bad Sign 4

albion1919

Under a Bad Sign 4

Oct 05, 2009 23:17

Title: Under a Bad Sign 4 (complete)
Characters/Pairing: Maya, Peter
Rating: PG
Word count: 4,112
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Rescued from Odessa Maya has to make a hard choice.
Note: KW Verse. Takes place after Let Go. Maya meets Peter. Sorry it's taken awhile.
Parts: 1, 2, 3, 4

( It's an ability that works correctly with two, a synergy, otherwise... )

fic: under a bad sign, kept woman 'verse, maya, peter, heroes

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dream_infinity0 October 5 2009, 23:35:30 UTC

great chapter.

are u continueing this?

albion1919 October 6 2009, 10:12:36 UTC

Thank you.

Maybe, but not now.

gimmemypickle October 6 2009, 03:43:00 UTC

Excellent! :D

albion1919 October 6 2009, 10:13:00 UTC

Thanks :) :)

razycrandomgirl October 6 2009, 16:39:15 UTC

Aww this is ... aww man. *in awe*

I-I YES! I want more.

Poor Nadia. She's growing up too quickly. Letters ... :( That's gonna be bitter sweet.

I really like the idea of Peter & Maya as surrogates to each other. I think that's very healing for both of them.

Oh Tammy wonderful job! And great lead in with everyone believing Peter was in a coma for years. I was like "O_O Oh noes!"

albion1919 October 6 2009, 17:49:08 UTC

YAY THANK YOU!!! :D

She is, the wool can't be over her eyes forever.

I am interested in that kind of relationship between them, they're so alike (but with some differences) I wish they had scenes together on the show.

Thanks again! This was difficult to write but I'm glad it's done now and I'm as happy as I can be with it.

Wanna write "carnival" fic now ;)

razycrandomgirl October 6 2009, 18:00:19 UTC

THANK YOU!

:( Nadia.

LOL at her thoughts on Richard though. And one day Jamie can return. :x

I'd be up for reading/writing that pairing ... I love that sibling vibe. They'd have a really good relationship.

I'm very excited for carnival fic! *barely contains self*

albion1919 October 6 2009, 18:07:33 UTC

She'd be the alpha in that friendship! Though I have a fic in mind where she sees him getting bullied and she's like "OH NO YOU DIDN'T! BIATCH IS GOING DOWN!" Yus, one day Jamie will turn up ;)

I will someday :)

But I’m still interested in the Gabriel/Maya dynamic, it’s just too convoluted and juicy not keep coming back to. And I love the idea of writing amnesia Gabriel.

mortalshuffle October 8 2009, 00:34:53 UTC

Sorry it took me so long to comment. It’s been a hectic week. But I’m here and ready to put my analysis hat on ( ... )

albion1919 October 9 2009, 09:49:23 UTC

No worries and I’ll put my hat on to! ;)

From what I’ve read people with NPD hardly ever respond well to therapy. Either they won’t admit that there’s anything wrong with them or they revel in their disorder. I think Gabriel is complicated. He can try to change but there’s always that suspicion of whether his empathy/love is real. Though I tend to think of him as a “Shy Narcissist” where the sufferer can feel compassion, is meek & gentle etc, but still lacks a sense of empathy but feels deep shame because he knows it. They’re more self aware. (The depression is part of the NPD ( ... )

razycrandomgirl October 11 2009, 19:27:40 UTC

I'd love to hear about Maya being two weeks late! :D

And Maybe Alejandro did mourn his wife. How long was it when he found her in the church? And he tried to have her arrested so ...

albion1919 October 11 2009, 22:28:28 UTC

YAY thanks! lol I was like hang on a minute, these dates don't add up...*facepalm* :P

I think she was meant to be at the church for 2-3 months. Him doing that is so interesting. He could have asked her before calling the cops but I guess he thought she did it. Though like I've said before I don't think he thought she was evil, just unhinged and in need of “help.”

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