Apotheosis: Chapter 18 - Metamorphosis
Apotheosis
Chapter 18 - Metamorphosis
In the morning, Ichigo was up early and ready to go. He slung his knapsack with the last of his possessions over his shoulder and left without a backward glance. Renji followed silently, nursing a hangover but still smiling beneath the dark sunglasses shading his vision.
They stopped at the Kurosaki home ( Read more... )
Chapter 18 - Metamorphosis
In the morning, Ichigo was up early and ready to go. He slung his knapsack with the last of his possessions over his shoulder and left without a backward glance. Renji followed silently, nursing a hangover but still smiling beneath the dark sunglasses shading his vision.
They stopped at the Kurosaki home ( Read more... )
With the amount of fics I've read in-between installments of this one there's a lot of general mash running around my head but I'm gonna leave a comment with as much as I remember. It's almost a given I'll re-read this from start to finish again all in one go so you'll probably get another comment very soon :p
But anyways. Like I've said countless times before, I just can't believe how smoothly you write. Even the time and scene shifts seem to just flow from one to the other without confusion and general "where are we again?"-ness ( ... )
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I wish there'd been more Rukia, too. There just wasn't room, though. =/ I had a whole pile of ideas for scenes, but when it came to piecing things together, all the little extra bits seemed like distractions from the main storyline, and the threads got lost in the shuffle. I'm quite sad about that, actually. But that's ok... there's quite a lot more Rukia in the third story. :)
Sappiness... well I did what I could to keep them in character, and then I had to improvise the rest. We really don't know how they'd act in this type of situation, and while I don't think they'd be total saps, I know for darned certain that almost everyone is a little smushy with their lover, so I can get away with some of it. :P I tried to show a balance of different aspects of their personality - squabbling, angry, humourous, emotional, romantic, etc., while still remembering that part of the plot in the story was how they learned to be really together. If canon ever contradicts me on how the guys act in love, I'll try ( ... )
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(dude, pet peeve or not, I will call them 'boys'. I call the Winchesters 'boys' and they're both older than me. It's just one of my habits, so there.)
Mmm tatts. I still haven't got mine and I was supposed to get it on my 18th b'day. You know, a whole almost two years ago. I will get one this year!
^_________^ ♥
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And mmm Winchester boys! ^_^ Have I mentioned yet today how much I like your icon?
I'm such a lazy... I want to get my tattoo, too, but I keep putting it off, saying, "I gotta be sure that I really want this!" *is lame* I'll go get mine if you go get yours! Help us, Dean!
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You're on. It's not a matter of really whether you want it or not (well, it is) but the more important question is to make sure you get something that you're gonna enjoy for the rest of your life. Since you know, youre kinda stuck with it :D *snickers*
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heeeheee Thanks! Say weren't you going to draw something for god ---- erm Akuni?
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