Kory Fans....help!
So ABC part one is off with the beta reader and I'm working on part two. Well, I've hit a snag. Or not quite a snag, yet. The thing is that Kory shows up in things. Not for long, but I'm really not sure that I can write her "voice" properly. And as I had badly characterized kids, I would hate to make myself a hypocrite. Thus I'm asking for help.
This is open to anyone that has a grasp of the character and her mannerisms even if you aren't a writer. If you are a writer that works too. What I need is for someone to look over the scene and tell me a) how it comes off and b) how to make it in keeping with her character.
Any takers? *makes wibbly eyes*
This is open to anyone that has a grasp of the character and her mannerisms even if you aren't a writer. If you are a writer that works too. What I need is for someone to look over the scene and tell me a) how it comes off and b) how to make it in keeping with her character.
Any takers? *makes wibbly eyes*