Comments | aijou_aibou: [fic] Just Don't Look Back, chapter 10 - Yugioh, YamixYugi, angst/romance, R, AU

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[fic] Just Don't Look Back, chapter 10 - Yugioh, YamixYugi, angst/romance, R, AU

Jan 27, 2010 12:16

Title: Just Don't Look Back
Chapter: 10
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/romance
Pairing: YamixYugi
Archive: Here
Overall warnings: AU, implied sex, insanity, violence
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Before he met Yugi, Yami spent his days panhandling alone. Yugi put his heart into changing Yami’s life, giving him companionship, a ( Read more... )

genre: romance, pairing: yami/yugi, fanfiction: yugioh, genre: angst, rating: r, fic: just don't look back, story type: chapter

Comments 10

bunnynumber13 January 27 2010, 18:58:10 UTC

You certainly know how to keep things interesting! The story started in such a simple place too... It's definitely not going in directions I thought it would go and in my book that is a good thing. I continue to look forward to reading the rest of it.

duelist_gurl163 January 27 2010, 19:28:23 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear that, I really wanted this one to develop over time and take some twists that weren't too predictable. I'll do my best to continue to keep it interesting. ^^

strawberrykaoru January 27 2010, 19:32:37 UTC

Oho! Yes please, plot twist and angst. No more can I ask for.

I'm glad Eve cleared up some of the points in regards to Yami's behaviour...also, Shoua. HEE. YES. More backstory on that dude please. :D

*runs back to doing tutorial work*

duelist_gurl163 January 27 2010, 19:55:59 UTC

Yeah, there was a bit of info-dumping in this one...I'm hoping by now people will appreciate the info though. xD; More on Shoua in the future~

Thanks for taking the time off tutorial to comment! xD

hello203 January 28 2010, 01:03:27 UTC

IIIIII Yami, what have you done! You poor thing. T___T Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

duelist_gurl163 January 30 2010, 15:21:16 UTC

He such an impulsive character. u_u Thanks!

inuconen January 28 2010, 03:10:39 UTC

OMjesus

Another amazing chapter
<3

duelist_gurl163 January 30 2010, 15:21:33 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

momduels January 28 2010, 14:37:18 UTC

I'm really liking this story. It's different than your usual puzzleshipping stories. I like that there is some secret from the past to discover and Yami killing someone who hurt Yugi is a darker twist but totally understandable. Nice writing.

duelist_gurl163 January 30 2010, 15:22:16 UTC

Well, it is AU...and has been worked on for over two years. xD Hopefully it's better than the others!