Language Lessons fic commentary part 1/4: Always
Another commentary from my fic commentary meme. glory_jean asked for commentary for as much of the Language Lessons series as I was willing to give. Since I don't have a whole lot to do today (or, well, I do, but I don't feel like doing it--who wants to do laundry on Labor Day?), I think I'll do the whole thing, just because I'm, you know, nice. *g
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I ceased being an author and became a transcriber for the characters who knew exactly what they wanted to say.
Happens to me a lot.
"That thought, about him being twice as hurt, occurred suddenly to me as I was writing this, and I had to put it down here. Kills me dead, that realisation. And I think it kills Rose dead, too-which is why she had to reassure him that she knows very well that he loves her; he doesn't have to say the words."
That is one of the lines that I find the most striking in this fic.
"Pronunciation guide: Vowels are pronounced as they would be in Spanish"
Heh, that's funny. Since Spanish is the only other language I know, I automatically made the vowels Spanish ones in my head. I even actually pondered whether to use the Mexican double L or the Spanish one. So, Spanish one it is. :D
"And this is so Ten, too: Less than a minute after the most mind-blowing orgasm he's had in years, and he's already asking questions."
Hehe. Of course.
Of course I had to end with fluff. This is me, after all….
Fluff is good.
*nods emphatically*
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I unfortunately learned as I had a Houdini hamster as a kid and Dog that insisted on barking at the poor thing till I came an put it back in it's cage. More then once was thankful that the dog was more interested in barking then tasting.
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