Even though Ben and Alex are played by the same man in my head, they are two very different characters. Alex does run-on sentences when he's stressed. Ben does fragments
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*nods & hugs* It just...flows with the narrative and helps ramp the tension up in the scene. OTOH, that may be a cheat. And I don't know if it's him steeling himself to do something messy and spectacular (werewolf claws through his carotid artery), or just being methodical--and if I don't know my own character's motivation for doing something, this is a a problem.
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ARGH.
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