So, I sent the DragonFic to janchristensen...
...my (published) Mom.
And she said it's a really clean MS (with a few very minor quibbles) and doesn't think I'll have any problems getting it published. *blinks, then dances with glee*
I ran it past the Hubby, who has watched me piss and moan about the thing for over a month, last night, and he also had a few minor, easily fixable quibbles.
Now I just have to wait for snarking_boojum to get back to me with it. *wibbles* I caught a glance at it at LTUE, and the first page is bleeding fairly heavily, and I'm wondering if I should SHOW the meeting between Russ and Morrigan rather than have him TELL Mandy about it, but it's a series with a format... ugh, I don't know.
NOTE TO SELF: More details about why Morrigan left Ainmire, plz. Also, better description of the Snot Puppet.
I also worked on my edit of the GargoyleFic last night, adding the scenes I wanted to add and tightening up some stuff. And I just now remembered where I'd put my other notes of what I wanted to add to it. Looking them over...I'm not sure how much they add. *ponders*
And, just for fun, inspired by Eric Swedin's comment on the "Portrayal of Hacking in Film and Television" panel at LTUE:
And she said it's a really clean MS (with a few very minor quibbles) and doesn't think I'll have any problems getting it published. *blinks, then dances with glee*
I ran it past the Hubby, who has watched me piss and moan about the thing for over a month, last night, and he also had a few minor, easily fixable quibbles.
Now I just have to wait for snarking_boojum to get back to me with it. *wibbles* I caught a glance at it at LTUE, and the first page is bleeding fairly heavily, and I'm wondering if I should SHOW the meeting between Russ and Morrigan rather than have him TELL Mandy about it, but it's a series with a format... ugh, I don't know.
NOTE TO SELF: More details about why Morrigan left Ainmire, plz. Also, better description of the Snot Puppet.
I also worked on my edit of the GargoyleFic last night, adding the scenes I wanted to add and tightening up some stuff. And I just now remembered where I'd put my other notes of what I wanted to add to it. Looking them over...I'm not sure how much they add. *ponders*
And, just for fun, inspired by Eric Swedin's comment on the "Portrayal of Hacking in Film and Television" panel at LTUE: