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adonis_coil

Essay! Because Aaya logic needs a little asplainin'

Jul 22, 2006 18:15

ESSAY OF DOOM. MUSIC, RELATIONSHIPS OF IN CANON AND OUT, and me babbling a lot on how Ayame sees everyone else and why.

First priority! - LovesSee Hatori and Mine's section below! These are people who Ayame's world revolves around, absolutely and without question. He will do anything he can think of for them, he is very protective of them and will ( Read more... )

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positive_print July 23 2006, 00:59:05 UTC

There is, to me, a very simple fear behind it that has nothing to do with Akito... if he tells Hatori that he loves him, Hatori might tell him to stop.

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That is so so Ayame. It's... almost as if he were a kid doing something he's not allowed to behind the parent's back, only it's not really a bad thing, but he doesn't want to get caught anyway because he might be punished for it and... just. Ow.

Also, Mine:

When he is asked by Yuki what her relationship is to him, the subject change could give a man whiplash. No matter what way he answered that, it could have drawn attention and danger to her. He DID learn from Kana.Yes. I'd... never seen it like that, but, I think that's pretty much the way it is. ;_ ( ... )

adonis_coil July 23 2006, 18:49:14 UTC

On Mine... yes and somehow it still manages to be one of the healthiest relationships in the series. I'm almost amazed for her patience for him... but on the other hand, I do believe he told her a whole lot, if not all of what was going on.

On Akiha: NO HATORI DOESN'T! ... But it still would be horribly hilarious. I want a Tori-san dammit!

Heeee, Ayame's really not perfect at reading Akiha yet... in a way, I think they're still learning each other's prompts. It's kinda cute... and frustrating in other ways. They can't just TALK plainly because... it's them.

marezydoats July 23 2006, 01:11:10 UTC

God, I loved this essay.

I have nothing useful to say. Yes.

haeralis July 23 2006, 01:48:54 UTC

I really need to stop being a whore for CFUD-related essays.

Wait, what am I saying?!

Ahhhn~ I love how you've captured Ayame here. My one worry at having an Ayame in camp originally was how the player would handle Ayame's complex Way-Of-Going-About-Things, how his relationships with people in canon would reflect in camp relationships, etc. I believe you've lived up to the title wonderfully.

My only question is, where are the threads with Akiha and Ayame during the Moon fiasco? I never seemed to recall that. And I love it when they interact, because it's like watching a pair of twin peacocks or something. XD

blackandwhiteox July 23 2006, 01:53:32 UTC

I want to have sex with your icon.

haeralis July 23 2006, 01:55:29 UTC

Guess what my icon wants to do.

adonis_coil July 23 2006, 18:45:36 UTC

Your wish is my command!

Moon threads!
At one day: Akiha and Ayame's first reaction. They had been staying with each other since this point.

At thirty minutes: Ayame and Akiha say their goodbyes!

And finally, the end!: Relief goes here!

blackandwhiteox July 23 2006, 01:52:46 UTC

Relationships~~ Will answer to the essay it self later, maybe, though I already talked to you as you were writing it!

The latest for everyone!

Haru and Ayame: On the surface, not a lot has changed. Hatsuharu gets tired around loud people fast, and Ayame is obviously not an exception to this. However, he'll take a loud, sparkly Ayame over a heartless Ayame any day. Just because he's not a fan of the sparkles doesn't mean he will forced that on anyone else ( ... )

adonis_coil July 23 2006, 19:08:54 UTC

Haru and Ayame! Ayame is starting to have some genuine affection for Haru! It wasn't always like this... Haru gave him a hard time and so Ayame gave him a hard time back, but after that eased, it really settled almost calmly between them. As I've said, Ayame sort of considers Haru the adult... this is both a mix of relief and... guilt. Because he SHOULD be the one there solving the problems and soothing the situations... but he really can't. He'd buckle under it. So he admires Haru for doing it ( ... )