I lied - it's up today. I can't stuff much more chemistry into my brain, so I finished this off.
Title: Shur'tugalar Rïsa.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, a bit of Arthur/Gwen, and a bit of Gwen/Lancelot, even a bit of Merlin/Morgana. Later on, anyway.
Warnings: Violence, dragons, elves, magic. Y'know, fantasy stuff.
Spoiler(s): Nope. None at all.
Word count: 4259 for this chapter.
Rating: PG. At the moment, anyway. Different chapters may change.
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I ADORED the interaction between Aravae and Leon, and the way she respects him so much, loved it! Her instincts are very good ;) YAY FOR LEON!!! He was really great.
Merlin, Merlin, Merlin... *hits him* He makes you happy, this does not mean you avoid him and hurt him, it means you stay close to him and make him happy too. *shakes head* Moron. ;) Open your eyes Merlin!!! You've really involved my emotions in this story well, and it's really great that we all want to hit Merlin and tell him to open his eyes. Well done! His obliviousness was funny though, especially when he was telling Arthur that he 'didn't clean up too badly' and Aravae was like: 'Blind' I could just hear her saying that in my head, it was excellent!
And we got Eragon backstory! That was a really good way to write it, with Eragon having no choice. I really liked that bit. The entire scene by the campfire was really nice, hearing a bit more about the Riders, and I also liked that you did have Arthur sort of fancy Gwen, in keeping with the legend, even if this is going to be a Merlin/Arthur fic.
Vesparr, OMG, Vesparr! I ADORED him in this chapter!! 'So I can't tell them I like their beards?' *cracks up* Seriously, I laughed just as hard as Merlin and Arthur - on this note, the description of Merlin when he was laughing... wow. That was amazing. Back to Vesparr: he was just so young and foolish and witty and perfect *squishes him* I really, really loved him!!!
LOL at Vesparr and Aravae talking about Merlin and Arthur ;) The descriptions in the whole of this I really liked, I think that when you were sort of glazing over exactly what was being said... I don;t even know why but I thought you did that well. And the way Merlin spoke: 'That she did.' Stuff like that was great, I do that! I think it really sort of... meh. Not sure what I mean, but I liked it!
I saw another post by you before this, so I'm off to read that now! Loved it, as always!
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Wow, you really get all worked up about it? That's really flattering. Honestly, it is. x3
I adore writing oblivious Merlin. He's just hilarious, and so much fun to write. He does make me want to smack him, though. xDD
Lawl, that bit was so random in my head, but I couldn't resist it. It was calling for it. They are clearily saying, "I love you, you great useless moron", but in a subtle man way. x3
I did. It was totally random and completely not what I am sure Paolini is planning, but it was the only thing I could come up with that made any sense, so there you go. I am glad that you liked it.
Yeah, there will even be some Arthur/Gwen later, but don't worry, it'll be Merlin/Arthur all the way after that. x3
Haha.
He is totally my inner child, I swear.
I could not help myself with my beards - it came to me and I just wrote it, then giggled. Of course he was young and foolish - he is young and foolish. He also doesn't mean to be witty, he just is by accident. xD
I'm glad you liked the description of Merlin laughing - writing it from Arthur's point of view makes it a little more interesting, if harder - I find it harder to characterise Arthur. x3
*Snort*
Yeah, they were. Dunno what about, though - that's why I left it to the imagination. xDD
Meh, I just make it up as I go along really. Only the main events are preplanned - the rest just falls into place as I go along.
Haha. It's a bit random, that one. x3
Thank you - I am glad you are still loving reading it as much as I am loving writing it.
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LOL. Oh yeah, they're so subtle that Merlin hasn't even figured out what he's saying yet ;)
I hope he's not planning that anyway! Could be interesting if he was though.... ;)
Good good, the Arthur/Gwen was done well though, especially with Arthur hoping that she'd distract him from Merlin. Which didn't exactly go to plan. ;) Poor Arthur!
I love your inner child! *hus it* GO VESPARR! It's really great to see a dragon being young and playful too, I love it!
I wouldn't have known, honestly. You do them both brilliantly!
LOL, fair enough ;)
I like this way of writing, it brings good stuff! Randomness is good though!
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Yeah. I mean, chances are he's dead now, but still. At least he gets an awesome role in my fic, right? xD
He hasn't. He's just kind of teasing Arthur, but really it means, "I LOVE YOU. TAKE ME NOW." 'Cept no one but Aravae knows that is what Merlin really means.
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And me, because I know my characters far too well to be healthy. x3
I know. Poor sod. I feel mean, but the next chapter will make up for it. Well, sort of.
My inner child is a freak, trust me. xDD
Aw, thank you. That makes me feel better. x3
Haha. I just write as it comes to, rambling and sometimes deleting 'cause it sucks and writing it better. XD
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LOL, I think Arthur knows what he hopes Merlin means ;)
I've told you before, this is not possible. ;D
Freaks are cool *nods* ;)
I'm glad ;D
LOL, fair enough. That's what I do, only nothing ever gets edited and then it never gets posted ;)
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I love your icon - it's awesome. x3
I don't want him to be dead. He is pretty awesome - it'd be sad if he was dead.
He does. I thought he should get credit for being kick arse. xD
I do know my charries too well. It is sad, it honestly is.
Haha.
Well, I write loads, then throw it up in the hope that it doesn't fail too badly. x3
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I know, it's very, very sad *sniffle* Of course, it's not true, but if it were, it would be very sad ;)
It certainly hasn't so far! I like your tactics! ;
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