I lied - it's up today. I can't stuff much more chemistry into my brain, so I finished this off.

Jan 26, 2010 18:56


Title: Shur'tugalar Rïsa.
Pairing(s): Arthur/Merlin, a bit of Arthur/Gwen, and a bit of Gwen/Lancelot, even a bit of Merlin/Morgana. Later on, anyway.
Warnings: Violence, dragons, elves, magic. Y'know, fantasy stuff.
Spoiler(s): Nope. None at all.
Word count: 4259 for this chapter.
Rating: PG. At the moment, anyway. Different chapters may change.
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archaeologist_d January 26 2010, 20:46:42 UTC
I liked how the dragons sometimes keeps things from their riders. Obviously Merlin's dragon thinks Merlin is oblivious and it is apparently so. Well done.

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adeina_rhyddha January 26 2010, 20:49:43 UTC
Of course they do - they are sneaky, sneaky dragons. x3
He is utterly oblivious. It's a lot of fun to write. xD
Thank you, and I'm glad you are still enjoying it.

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mybrainsrmush January 26 2010, 20:50:05 UTC
Imagine my surprise and joy when my idol/fiancée turns out to be the writer of this series also, which I love with all my heart. You're really not doing anything for yourself if you ever want me to stop worshipping the ground you walk on.
Honestly. :)
I both love the fact that Meelin is so utterly clueless, and hat to pull my hair out cause of it. It's perfect ;)
also, I friended you cause i obviously need to stalk yourwritinv more thoroughly. Much luffs <3

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adeina_rhyddha January 26 2010, 20:52:40 UTC
Oh, gosh. Thank you - I'm glad you like it so much, 'cause I love writing it. xD
Haha.
It is so much fun to write him so utterly oblivious, so I'm glad you like that - though I'd stop pulling your hair out if I were you. xD
I added you, and I think you'll be rather pleased to know that I shall be posting something shortly...

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mybrainsrmush January 26 2010, 20:56:41 UTC
Brilliant. I'll try and be the first to post ;) though I think we are in different timezones cause it's 4.54am for me right now and I've had no sleep whatsoever cause I was busy reading from part three to here(I've been away from internetaccess for a while, so was catching up). It's just that riveting:)

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adeina_rhyddha January 26 2010, 21:03:17 UTC
Good luck with that - woodsgal will be there too. x3
I'm in England, so yeah. xD
Wow.
Really?
I'm flattered.
Really, I am.
So many people love this fic. I'm amazed at the response. x3
Riveting. Wow.
Honestly, people are so complimentory. x3
Chapter eight should be up over the next couple of days ( she says... ) and then chatper nine...
Chapter nine is gonna be epic, trust me. xD

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book_worm_vicky January 26 2010, 21:19:10 UTC
Just read your AN, the VARDEN LEADER!! I <3 you!! And would do the cool hearts if I could but I can't. Also, chemistry, ugh.

BUT THE VARDEN LEADER!! YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYYAYAYAY!! I am very, very happy about this. It's so him too.

....

Just realised that I don't even know if it is him, but I will soon find out, and then I will reply to this with my actual comment ;)

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adeina_rhyddha January 26 2010, 21:24:47 UTC
Haha.
You will see.
I am not giving you any spoilers. >=]

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book_worm_vicky January 26 2010, 21:43:23 UTC
I think I love you ( ... )

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adeina_rhyddha January 26 2010, 21:54:24 UTC
I thought you might like it, and I decided that Leon should get a nice role in this fic. xD ( ... )

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fishwrites January 26 2010, 21:25:32 UTC
Love it how Vesparr is Arthur's alter ego. Lovely chapter! I like how you've explained Eragon's departure also.

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adeina_rhyddha January 26 2010, 21:30:46 UTC
Vesparr is my inner child coming out to play. xDD
I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you. x3
Gah, that was so random.
It was the only thing that I could come up with.

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mychaostheorem January 27 2010, 10:06:17 UTC
:D :D
THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOME CHAPTER!
Ah! there's so many parts that i want to comment on and aw, MERLIN, you're too cute!
Then again so is everybody (even Arthur) in this... Vesperr's weird fascination with beards, LOL. guess it makes sense since the elves don't grow beards! And Vesperr insulting short ppl (we have feelings you know :P)

And wow, cool explanation for Eragon's no-show... I thought that he was dead but I guess this is worse.... Also is Nasuada dead? Or is that to be revealed? In any case, I like the Varden and the Dwarfs. Can't wait to find out what happens there :D

And CONGRATULATIONS -if your exams are over now (I dunno if you have finished yet cos time works weirdly on your side of the world)

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adeina_rhyddha January 27 2010, 12:17:18 UTC
Aw, thank you. It's a bit of a plot device chapter, really, so I can set the next chapter up. x3
Merlin is adorable. It's so funny. Writing him as so blatently oblivious is just SO MUCH FUN.
Aw. Haha, I don't know why I wrote that. As I've said many times, Vesparr is my inner child, and my inner child always wants to ask men with beards if I can stroke them.
My inner child is very, very strange.
Haha. He wasn't insulting him, just making a comment. The only other time he's seen a dwarf was when he was small enough to sit on Arthur's head, remember? So he's just making a comment. x3
Bah, I just rambled. It was the best I could come up with.
Yes, it's happening long after Nasuada, so she's snuffed it. That's why Leon is in charge, see?
Not a lot is really going to happen. Like I said, it's a bit of a plot device, setting up the next chapter. The Varden will be coming in again later, though. x3
They are over! ALL OVER.
Until the summer. But still!

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