I Call The Shots - As Close to pwp as i get
Title: I Call The Shots
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4215
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: Taemin is angry but really he's horny/ Jinki has a sudden fit of DominatingKinkiJinki (Established Couple)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4215
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: Taemin is angry but really he's horny/ Jinki has a sudden fit of DominatingKinkiJinki (Established Couple)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )
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*looks at a can of Pepsi's ingredients for a moment*
How did you? I mean...it's...I just...(sigh)
Ok ok. This is beautiful! It's all love and caring wrapped in an S&M package (pun intended) Your writing style is so descriptive and clear, my heart stopped right along with Taemin's. I LOVE strong Kinki!Jinki. I love how he's a little drunk off of his newfound power and how this is almost the beginning of a master/slave relationship. Like they've crossed some invisible threshold. Here's my favorite stuff:
"Lock it, please," Jinki reminds Taemin, not yet turning around. He's counting in his head in every language he knows in an attempt to make sure he's fully in control of himself though Jinki is well aware that the minute he turns around and sees Taemin's big eyes and soft lips all bets are off. The beat in his brain is heavy and hungry and he swallows before he turns around.
and this...
Which is why his lips part pliantly and his teeth gently nip the coil of leather. Taemin hears Jinki's little intake of breath ( ... )
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