I Call The Shots - As Close to pwp as i get
Title: I Call The Shots
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4215
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: Taemin is angry but really he's horny/ Jinki has a sudden fit of DominatingKinkiJinki (Established Couple)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4215
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary: Taemin is angry but really he's horny/ Jinki has a sudden fit of DominatingKinkiJinki (Established Couple)
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a ( Read more... )
*looks at a can of Pepsi's ingredients for a moment*
How did you? I mean...it's...I just...(sigh)
Ok ok. This is beautiful! It's all love and caring wrapped in an S&M package (pun intended) Your writing style is so descriptive and clear, my heart stopped right along with Taemin's. I LOVE strong Kinki!Jinki. I love how he's a little drunk off of his newfound power and how this is almost the beginning of a master/slave relationship. Like they've crossed some invisible threshold. Here's my favorite stuff:
"Lock it, please," Jinki reminds Taemin, not yet turning around. He's counting in his head in every language he knows in an attempt to make sure he's fully in control of himself though Jinki is well aware that the minute he turns around and sees Taemin's big eyes and soft lips all bets are off. The beat in his brain is heavy and hungry and he swallows before he turns around.
and this...
Which is why his lips part pliantly and his teeth gently nip the coil of leather. Taemin hears Jinki's little intake of breath triumphantly and follows the nibble with a slow drag of his tongue. He doesn't think about the fact he was just snapping this same leather across the stage which is probably not the cleanest place in the world. Taemin doesn't think about anything but that look in his lover's eyes and the way this feels to him. Following the first lick up with a second, he then gently kisses the coil of leather with the same passionate reverence he might use to kiss Jinki himself.
TAEMIN IS LICKING THE WHIP! EFFING LICKING IT! *dies*
and this cray-cray right here...
He's so distracted by the pleasure of Jinki's lips and the frustration of needing more contact and of making sure he obeys so Jinki won't stop that at first he barely notices as cool slick leather winds around the base of his cock. But then the friction increases and increases and he tears his mouth from Jinki's because he can't breathe with this slick tight smoothness enveloping his erection from base to tip. Taemin is too shocked and aroused to make any kind of coherent sound, knuckles again whitening as he tightens his grip on the headboard.
JINKI WRAPS THE WHIP AROUND TAE-TAE'S DICK?
*flails around*
I had to stop and go get a towel to sit on for this next part...
"You have no idea what the sight and sound of you begging me does to me," Jinki growls, almost tearing off his jeans and shirt. He's suffering almost as much as Taemin and he has to take a few deep breaths before he can keep himself in control. "It makes me feel so powerful and so humble at the same time. You're so beautiful, my Taemin," he says, trying to gentle both his tone and actions as he lifts Taemin's trembling legs on his shoulders and lines himself up carefully. "I need you," Jinki whispers...
strong, powerful Jinki, umf
*dies again*
Your description of their emotions and sensations is so palpable and so real it was incredible. You're such a good writer!
I have only on question, about this part:
The panic that crosses Taemin's face demands something from Jinki and he's already moving, placing his free bare hand in the middle of Taemin's equally naked chest and leaning in to almost kiss the younger man. "I'm here, Tae, I'm here. You're safe. I've got you," he whispers. Jinki repeats the words over and over again until the fear leaves Taemin's face, his hand softly petting the beautiful bare skin before him, sliding up to stroke messy and sweat damp hair back from Taemin's face....Jinki watches Taemin closely. He's read about this kind of thing, but actually seeing it, being a part of it is awe-inspiring.
Was Taemin having a panic-attack? Is that what Jinki "read about"?
And did you see this? Apparently their concert was chock full of OnTae!
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